题目内容

13.假如你是李华,最近你从报纸上看到一家涉外酒店招聘暑期兼职工的广告,请你根据下列要点提示写一封应聘信.
1.李华,女,18岁,身体健康.
2.擅长英语,口语流利.
3.性格外向,交际能力强.
注意:
1.词数120左右.
2.书信格式已经给出,不计入总词数.
3.可以适当拓展.
Dear Sir or Madame,
                                                 
Yours,
Li Hua.

分析 本篇书面表达属于英文书信,根据提示信息写一封应聘信.写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:李华,女,18岁,身体健康.擅长英语,口语流利.性格外向,交际能力强.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
亮点分析:文中运用了较好的从句和复合句,如开头用复合句介绍自己"My name is Li Hua and I am 18 years old…"简单却能使内容清晰,条件状语从句"I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your hotel."等;文中多处运用到好的固定短语,如"in response to…""be fit for…""have no difficulty in doing sth""be good at doing sth"等;第二部分根据提示介绍优点,较好的运用了连接词"Firstly…Secondly…Finally…",使文章逻辑层次分明,条理清晰;最后有适当的扩展,并且结尾有礼有节,是一篇较好的考场作文.

解答 Dear Sir or Madame,
I am writing in response to your advertisement in the newspaper.My name is Li Hua and I am 18 years old.I think I will be fit for the job as a waitress in your hotel this summer vacation.(高分句型) My advantages are as follows:
Firstly,I am healthy and strong.I can work for long hours in summer.Secondly,my English is excellent.I can speak English fluently and have no difficulty communicating with foreigners.(高分句型)Finally,I am outgoing and good at communicating with others.As a result,I am popular among my classmates and teachers.
I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your hotel.(高分句型) I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.

点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯,比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词,使文章流畅、通顺,并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感.(1)认真审题,确定体裁. (2)构思要点.根据题目要求,理解要表达的要点.设计好文章的层次段落,考虑所用时态、人称等,把要点串联起来,构成文章框架.(3)选词造句,避难选易.(4)认真检查,避免错误.仔细阅读全文,查找是否有错,注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误,句式是否正确.逻辑是否一致.

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