题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华。为了促进学生多读书,读好书,打造校园书香氛围,你校发起读书运动。请你按照以下要点写一篇倡议书,倡导同学们读书。
表达要点:1. 为什么读书 2. 读什么书, 怎样读书 3. 发起倡议
注意:可适当增加细节使行文连贯。字数110左右。开头已经为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear schoolmates,
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【答案】
Dear schoolmates,
Do you like reading?
Books are like our friends. Just like hanging around with a good friend, reading can broaden our horizons, enlarge our knowledge, improve our taste for life and keep us company when we feel lonely.
So what books should we read? We should choose the books which benefit us most with knowledge, virtue and good interest. And we’d better think while reading instead of just taking in everything blindly. taking notes will help you learn more from books.
Now, aiming to motivate us students to read more good books and build a more cultural school environment which is heavy with the atmosphere of reading, our school has launched a reading campaign. This is really a meaningful activity. Why not pick up a book now and join in the fun? Wish you a good journey in books.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达是要求写倡议书,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、仔细研读题目所给信息,不要误解信息,也不要漏掉要点,明确自己是以何种目的来写这封倡议书。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构,符合倡议书口吻和语气。词汇短语丰富,如hanging around with a good friend与朋友闲逛,improve our taste for life提升我们对生活的品味。有高级句式,如Now, aiming to motivate us students to read more good books and build a more cultural school environment which is heavy with the atmosphere of reading, our school has launched a reading campaign. 这里的状语非常长,所以前置,保证句子结构整齐。