题目内容
10.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(╲)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Nowadays,the destruction of forests is one of most serious environment problems.From that I understand,people are destroying thousands of square kilometers of trees every day.This is killing hundreds of wild animals live in the forests.But something must be done.Unfortunately,we don't do everything to protect the forests.
People who cut down trees should go to prison.That's what happens in some country to people who sell plastic bags.That's what should happened to people who destroy the forests.I can't help but to think that we must protect wildlife for future generations.Hopeful,our children will be even much responsible that we are today.
分析 植被破坏已经相当严重,每天都有树木被杀掉.保护树木应该受到惩罚.
解答 Nowadays,the destruction of∧forests is one of most serious environment problems.From that I understand,people are destroying thousands of square kilometers of trees every day.This is killing hundreds of wild animals live in the forests.But something must be done.Unfortunately,we don't do everything to protect the forests.
People who cut down trees should go to prison.That's what happens in some country to people who sell plastic bags.That's what should happened to people who destroy the forests.I can't help but to think that we must protect wildlife for future generations.Hopeful,our children will be even much responsible that we are today.
1.of 后加the 考查冠词.这里是特指对于森林的破坏,所以用定冠词the.
2.that---what 考查名词性从句.本句是一个宾语从句,从句中缺少宾语,所以用what来引导,what在句中做宾语.
3.live-living 考查非谓语.live与名词animals之间是主谓关系,所以用现在分词在句中做定语"生活在森林中的动物".
4.But---So 考查连词.前文是杀掉了大量的动物,后文必须采取措施阻止,两者之间是因果关系,所以用连词so.
5.everything---anything 考查不定代词.本句是一个否定句,anything用在否定句中.
6.country---countries 考查名词的数.这里的名词country是可数名词被some修饰后跟复数形式.
7.happened---happen 考查动词.情态动词should后跟动词原形happen.
8.to去掉 考查固定结构.can't help but do是英语的额固定结构"忍不住做某事,不得不做某事".
9.Hopeful---Hopefully;考查副词.此处是用副词在句中做状语"有希望地".
10.much---more 考查比较级.此处是未来我们的孩子们和我们现在的人相比较一定更有责任心,所以用比较级more.
点评 短文改错考查涉及面广,但却有所侧重.考查点测试频率最高的是动词,涉及动词考查的有时态、语态、非谓语动词形式、情态动词和动词的用法等.此外,还考查名词、介词、代词、冠词、形容词、副词、连词等,还涉及到句型结构、行文逻辑、固定搭配等.
When the family (40)D in,Ripton,adopted as an infant,was six.Morgan,also adopted,joined the family two years later.Soon the park was closed,to be a(n) (41)A showplace of playgrounds and green space.Michael made significant money in the real estate and Leslie joined a gym practice.The family enjoyed (42)D vacations in the winter and summers on Shelter Island.
The five boys who came to play video games changed everything."In the (43)D,it was just a lot of kids swarming all over the place,"says Michael.When the Rosens (44)D Carlos wasn't attending school because he didn't have suitable clothes,they bought him some.Then one night,they took the group to a (45)C after a Chinese dinner and realized there were other needs."The boys had no interest in books at all,"Michael says.Back at the penthouse,he (46)C they sit down to read aloud."Their vocabularies were limited,"he says."But my concept of what is smart and what is not changed that night because these kids were all smart (47)C just uneducated."
The boys still slept at their homes,though they spent after-school hours,most weekends and summer nights at the penthouse.There,a half-hour reading period before video games or television started.The kitchen timer was set,and everyone had to (48)A the words they didn't know.One summer,Michael took all the boys to the library; each got a card and picked a (49)Bto study.Will,Michael remembers,chose bodybuilding.A poet friend of the Rosens'suggested buying copies of Moby Dick and reading it together around the dining-room table."Well,it was (50)A,"admits Michael."That book is not written in a language these kids speak.But we kept pushing and pushing."
(51)C the big boys became a complete part of the Rosen household,even helping to light the candles at Hanukkah.Chores were assigned,including cleaning and (52)B Mr.Jenkins,the family dog.
The boys'own families were (53)A by what was happening."My mom didn't believe me when I told her about the penthouse.She thought I was involved with something (54)D."Juan Carlos's mother,Esther Ruiz,wondered,"Why would the Rosens be doing this?"But as time went on,she noticed (55)B in her son."It wasn't just the streets anymore.He was getting responsible.Michael and Leslie are the best."
36.A.surroundings | B.neighborhood | C.building | D.city |
37.A.rich | B.business | C.homeless | D.town |
38.A.nesting | B.singing | C.living | D.flying |
39.A.made up | B.lost | C.opened | D.fixed |
40.A.rushed | B.came | C.hurried | D.moved |
41.A.urban | B.countryside | C.building | D.park |
42.A.swimming | B.shopping | C.sightseeing | D.ski |
43.A.end | B.video | C.game | D.beginning |
44.A.saw | B.noticed | C.imagined | D.realized |
45.A.video shop | B.supermarket | C.bookstore | D.cinema |
46.A.hoped | B.wished | C.insisted | D.wanted |
47.A.and | B.or | C.but | D.besides |
48.A.circle | B.write | C.read | D.copy |
49.A.book | B.subject | C.course | D.school |
50.A.a nightmare | B.great fun | C.relaxing | D.interesting |
51.A.Quickly | B.Soon | C.Slowly | D.Luckily |
52.A.visiting | B.walking | C.accompanying | D.chasing |
53.A.puzzled | B.shocked | C.frightened | D.irritated |
54.A.boring | B.meaningless | C.helpless | D.bad |
55.A.secrets | B.changes | C.mysteries | D.improvements |
A. | were | B. | had been | C. | would have been | D. | would be |
A. | There | B. | It | C. | They | D. | That |
As time went on,I (43)A the computer was hardly touched.She said she didn't know(44)C to use it.I decided to teach her.I sat and (45)C everything and she seemed OK with what I said.Unfortunately,my sister called me at that moment(46)A we talked on the phone for an hour.Then when I saw her again,she was sitting in front of the computer,looking quite (47)D.The screen saver (屏幕保护) had appeared and she didn't know how to (48)D it off.She had tried (49)A every key and it didn't work.I told her,"Just (50)B the mouse a little."What I meant was that she just needed to move the mouse around to (51)B the computer up.What she did was to (52)C the mouse and start shaking it around in mid-air until the(53)Awent completely black.I couldn't help laughing because of her funny(54)D.The more I laughed the(55)Cshe got.
She thought that I was a (n) (56)A teacher and she decided to figure the thing out herself.Well,at least I helped her overcome her (57)C of breaking something and encouraged her to (58)D a little.
About a week later,I found a home-made (59)B card with a mouse on the front making a funny face(60)B to my door.It said,"Thanks for the computer lessons.Love,Mom."
41.A.theory | B.knowledge | C.technology | D.history |
42.A.watch | B.train | C.play | D.see |
43.A.found | B.heard | C.thought | D.ignored |
44.A.why | B.when | C.how | D.where |
45.A.learned | B.described | C.explained | D.discussed |
46.A.and | B.but | C.because | D.since |
47.A.amusing | B.relaxed | C.interesting | D.discouraged |
48.A.get | B.break | C.cut | D.turn |
49.A.hitting | B.feeling | C.changing | D.removing |
50.A.hang | B.shake | C.rub | D.push |
51.A.clean | B.wake | C.bring | D.take |
52.A.put up | B.cut off | C.pick up | D.put away |
53.A.screen | B.curtain | C.cover | D.window |
54.A.gesture | B.movement | C.expression | D.action |
55.A.ruder | B.happier | C.angrier | D.better |
56.A.impatient | B.humorous | C.careful | D.helpful |
57.A.sadness | B.pressure | C.fear | D.depression |
58.A.reply | B.observe | C.answer | D.experiment |
59.A.inviting | B.greeting | C.shopping | D.birthday |
60.A.appeared | B.stuck | C.combined | D.printed. |