Question

【题目】近年来大城市交通拥堵严重，影响了人们的生活和经济发展，对此人们十分抱怨。假如你是李华，请根据以下要点用英语给报社写封信。

1.交通现状及影响；

2.提出改进建议；

3.希望建议被采纳。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear editor,

I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic.

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Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor,

I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic. Nowadays, people in many big cities are always stuck in traffic jams and complaining about the tough situation. It has seriously influenced people’s daily life and economic development.

To solve the problem, I’d like to put forward some pieces of advice.First of all, more streets and roads should be built and we can speed up the flow of buses and cars in this way. Besides, the number of bikes and cars should be limited, which can undoubtedly smooth the traffic flow. What’s equally significant is that the number of private cars should be put under control. Meanwhile, buses should run on their own special routes which are not supposed to be used by other vehicles. Last but not least, it is a must to develop underground train quickly.

I do hope my suggestions will be helpful and well taken.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇书信类作文，要求给报社写一封信，一，通篇以一般现在时态为主。二，要点要齐全。主要要求有：1. 交通现状及影响；2. 提出改进建议；3. 希望建议被采纳，但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。3. 注意语气。既然是写建议信，所以要注意用词准确，易懂。

【范文亮点】：本文用了书信应该用的格式，用了一般现在时，将来时等的时态穿插。 be stuck in ，complain about,speed up ,等动词短语，使文章简练，另外First of all，Besides， Meanwhile， Last but not least，等连接词使文章条理清楚的，写出了各种要点，并且自己也写出了观点，主语从句的应用，例如What’s equally significant is that the number of private cars should be put under control.给文章增彩。