Question

【题目】书面表达（满分25分）

假如你是李华，现任你们学校的学生会主席。你将代表学生会起草一份倡议书，号召全校同学行动起来，为环保运动做出自己的努力。同时下周六学校将组织同学在全市进行环保宣传活动，征召志愿者到校学生会报名。

注意：(1)短文应该包括以上所提供的主要信息，可适当发挥;(2)词数：100左右;(3)倡议书格式以提供，不计入总词数;(4)参考词汇：征召(新人) recruit [v]

10 May, 2014

Dear brothers and sisters,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

University Students' Union

Answer 1

【答案】10 May, 2014

Dear brothers and sisters,

On behalf of the University Students' Union, I, the Chairman of the Union , am earnestly calling for your active participation in our environmental protection campaign. It is the duty of every global villager; man just can not sustain his glorious civilization without a rewarding environment, which will be possible only if man makes considerable efforts to protect the environment.

Do you cherish precious opportunities to volunteer in our joint efforts in environmental protection? Here is a great one not to be missed by any enthusiastic youth; Right next Saturday, our university is to run a publicity campaign to advocate environmental protection across the city. The University Students' Union will be in charge of recruitment of volunteers. Let's join our hands and take action immediately.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇倡议书，话题为学生熟知，与高中生的生活实际贴近，而且具有一定的开放性，使得每个学生都能够有话可说，符合新课标理念下的命题方向。首先简要介绍环保问题之重要，号召同学们行动起来，共同参与环保活动;其次就环保发出倡议，并征召志愿者。这样既把考生限定在一定范围之内，又给予了考生相当的发挥的自由，有助于考生的作文脱颖而出。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。

【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组： On behalf of 代表， call for 需要，join our hands 联手，take action 采取行动。 in charge of 负责，好句子有：man just can not sustain his glorious civilization without a rewarding environment, which will be possible only if man makes considerable efforts to protect the environment.这句话用了非限制性定语从句。Here is a great one not to be missed by any enthusiastic youth; 这句话用了不定式做定语。