Question

11．假如你是李华，你网友Johnny准备周末去铅山附近的黄岗山探险旅游，写信向你询问注意事项．请你根据下列提示，给他回一封电子邮件．
1．准备一张黄岗山的地图； 2．查询当地实时天气，带上必要的衣物、食品、药品及手电筒；
3．必要的话，找一位向导．
注意：1．词数：100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数．
Dear Johnny，
I'm glad to know that you will travel to and explore Huaggang Mountain．And it's a great pleasure for me to offer you some advice．
…Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 考查书信类作文的写作．是关于你校外教Johnny准备周末去附近的黄岗山探险旅游，写信向你询问注意事项．请你根据下列提示，给他回一封电子邮件，具体信息已经给出，考点只需要适当串联即可，在写作的时候一定要使用合适的连接词来连接全文，让文章成为一个整体，同时要注意使用英语句型，也要使用倒装句，定语从句等特殊的句式来提高文章的多样性．如Because there are few people living in the mountain，it's good for you to find several friends to make this exciting journey with you together．还要用适当的关联词把句与句连起来，如：First of all，meanwhile等分析：

解答 Dear Johnny，
    I'm glad to know that you will travel to and explore Huanggang Mountain．And it's a great pleasure for me to offer you some advice．
    First of all，you should prepare a local map of Huanggang Mountain．Before starting，you should surf the Internet to look for some information about the weather on the weekend there so as to take enough clothes and food．（高分句型一）Meanwhile，it's necessary to take a flashlight and some medicines．Because there are few people living in the mountain，it's good for you to find several friends to make this exciting journey with you together．（高分句型二）If a local guide will serve you，it will be even better．
    Special care should be taken while you travel in the mountain．I wish you a good time!
                                                                                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                                                                                              Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．