题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,暑假期间想找份兼职,下面的招聘启事引起了你的注意。请根据招聘信息两侧的注解,写封电子邮件询问相关事宜并应聘。要点如下:
1.介绍自己;
2.应聘的理由。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头与结尾已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I happened to have read your advertisement and am determined to apply for the job.
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Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I happened to have read your advertisement and am determined to apply for the job. There is several things that I want to know. In the first place, what I want to know is what gender you give preference to. Besides, how many students do you want to employ? In addition, if I am employed, how much can I earn? It is the working time that I care most. As you know, I am a student and I will go to university when the new term starts.
Why I apply for the job is that I’ll be able to get some valuable job experience as well as practice my spoken English by acting as an interpreter for you. I’ll greatly appreciate it if I, m offered the chance.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【解析】本文属于提纲类作文,要求假定你是李华,暑假期间想找份兼职,下面的招聘启事引起了你的注意。请根据招聘信息两侧的注解,写封电子邮件询问相关事宜并应聘。注意电子邮件的格式和用语。考虑用一般现在时来写。要点:1.介绍自己;2.应聘的理由。
这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如: In the first place首先,In addition另外。还使用了定语从句There is several things that I want to know.和主语从句In the first place, what I want to know is what gender you give preference to.等多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性。