Question

14．自央视推出了家风系列访谈，全社会掀起了谈论家风、反思家风的热潮．你的笔友Peter收看后写信向你询问：你的家风是什么？假如你是李华，给Peter回信，根据以下关键词，从中选取适合你的角度，并结合个人经历，晒出你的家风．
注意：
1． 词数：120左右，适当发挥；  
2． 开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3． 不得透露个人相关信息．

Dear Peter，
    I am very glad to receive your letter，in which you asked me about family tradition recently referred to on CCTV and meanwhile among the masses．  _____________________________________             
    What about your ideas about it？Looking forward to your letter．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"图表+提纲类"形式，根据文章所给图表和提示信息给笔友Peter写一封信，晒出自己的家风，既是提纲作文又是图表类作文．
时态应该用一般现在时．人称用第一和第三人称．
重要短语：ask sb about sth （询问某人关于某事），refer to…．（提及），family tradition （家风），introduce sth to sb （把某事介绍给某人），appreciate sth（欣赏某事），prepares sb sth （给某人准备某物），under the influence of （在…..的影响之下），do well in（在…..方面做的好），because of（因为），gives up（放弃），help sb with sth（帮助某人某事），quit sth（放弃某事），serve as（充当，用作），be rooted in（植根于），in the form of（以…．形式）．
【高分句型一】
1．I am very glad to receive your letter，in which you asked me about family tradition recently referred to on CCTV and meanwhile among the masses．
此处是"in which"引导的非限制性定语从句，主句为"I am very glad to receive your letter"，先行词为前面主句中的"letter"．
【高分句型二】
1．After dinner，she often gives up entertainment，helping our family with housework．
此处是由现在分词短语"helping our family with housework"作伴随状语，主句为"she often gives up entertainment"，主句的主语"she"与所给动词"help"存在逻辑上的主动关系．
【高分句型三】
2．It's my grandmother and my mother's diligent deeds that make me believe that if there is dirt just mop it repeatedly，never quitting until removing it．
此处是强调句型，强调句子的主语"my grandmother and my mother's diligent deeds"，如果去掉强调句型的骨架"It was/is …that"，句意通顺，句子为"my grandmother and my mother's diligent deeds make me believe that if there is dirt just mop it repeatedly，never quitting until removing it"．

解答 Dear Peter，
I am very glad to receive your letter，in which you asked me about family tradition recently referred to on CCTV and meanwhile among the masses．【高分句型一】Different families hold different focuses of family tradition，such as unity，love and care，honesty，diligence，respect and responsibility．（开头-提出不同的家庭有不同的家风） 
Now，I'd like to introduce ours to you-hard-working，which my family would appreciate permanently．【高分句型一】In the morning，my grandma usually gets up early，prepares us a good breakfast，and then begins to do other jobs．She works slowly，but always makes everything clean．Under the influence of my grandmother，my mother also does quite well both in her work and at home．Because of this attitude，every year she was titled"outstanding communist．"After dinner，she often gives up entertainment，helping our family with housework．【高分句型二】It's my grandmother and my mother's diligent deeds that make me believe that if there is dirt just mop it repeatedly，never quitting until removing it．【高分句型三】I serve as a good help to my teachers and classmates as well as my family．Hardworking has deeply rooted in my heart in the form of invisible power．（说明自家的家风） 
 Family education is an important part of Chinese traditional culture and education． It can be a life of truth； also the principle of doing things． Good family tradition pushes one generation after another to ensure children's healthy growth，whose positive energy promotes social progress of civilization．【高分句型四】（说明自家的家风） 
What about your ideas about it？Looking forward to your letter．（期待回复） 
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 写好这类图表及提纲式作文的关键是认真分析所给提示信息，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将要点完整地表述出来，并认真看图，围绕主题，提炼要点，发挥想象，语言力求准确、简洁．选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．