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8．每年都有许多人外出旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起了社会的广泛关注．某英文报社正在举行以"文明旅游"为主题的讨论．假定你是李华，请你给报社写一封信，呼吁大家做文明游客．要点如下：
（1）尊重习俗；  （2）不高声喧哗；   （3）其他
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾语已为你写好，不计入词总数．
Dear Editor，
I've read your discussions on how to behave properly while traveling．Every year，a great many holidaymakers go out for sightseeing and relaxation．While they are enjoying themselves，some of them behave rudely，which causes a big concern．How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic．（高分句型一）
In my opinion，it is necessary to watch our manners．First，we must respect and follow local customs．Besides，we'd better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others．Also，be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries．（高分句型二）More importantly，if we travel abroad，we should bear in mind that we are representing our country，so we need to be cautious about how we act．Only in this way can we enjoy our trips and have beautiful memories as well．（高分句型三）
Yours．
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息给报社写一封信，呼吁大家做文明游客，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：（1）尊重习俗；  （2）不高声喧哗；   （3）其他   2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：如非限制性定语从句which causes a big concern．主语从句How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic．宾语从句be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries．倒装句Only in this way can we enjoy our trips and have beautiful memories as well．

解答 Dear Editor，
     I've read your discussion on how to behave properly while traveling． Every year，a great many holidaymakers go out for sightseeing and relaxation．While they are enjoying themselves，some of them behave rudely，which causes a big concern．How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic．（高分句型一）
In my opinion，it is necessary to watch our manners．First，we must respect and follow local customs．Besides，we'd better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others．Also，be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries．（高分句型二）More importantly，if we travel abroad，we should bear in mind that we are representing our country，so we need to be cautious about how we act．Only in this way can we enjoy our trips and have beautiful memories as well．（高分句型三）
                                                                                                                                             Yours．
                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．