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【题目】某英文杂志现举办英语故事续写大赛。请你根据所写故事的开头,展开合理的想象,将故事补充完整。注意:词数120左右(提示部分不计入总词数)。
Last Sunday I was wandering in the zoo when I noticed a little girl standing alone by the road crying.
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【答案】Last Sunday I was wandering in the zoo when I noticed a little girl standing alone by the road crying. Without hesitation, I approached her and tried to find out what had happened to her, but it seemed that the girl had some doubts about my kindness. After showing her my ID card and student card, I convinced her that I was just trying to offer help. She told me that she had got separated from her mother while she was watching monkeys. I asked for her mother’s phone number; however, she couldn’t remember it due to her anxiety. By giving her patient guidance, I got her to recall it. Soon the worried mother rushed to us. Seeing her girl safe and sound, she expressed her gratitude to me.
Though it was just a small matter, the smile on their faces made my day!
【解析】试题分析:本文是一篇开放式作文,根据所写故事的开头,展开合理的想象,将故事补充完整。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用,主次分明,详略得当,语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写、错写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】
本文是一篇开放式作文,内容符合要求,句子衔接紧密,运用高级词组和句子。Without hesitation, I approached her and tried to find out what had happened to herwhat引导宾语从句;it seemed that the girl had some doubts about my kindness.运用固定句式;She told me that she had got separated from her mother while she was watching monkeys.宾语从句和时间状语从句完美结合;Seeing her girl safe and sound, she expressed her gratitude to me.现在分词做时间状语;Though it was just a small matter, the smile on their faces made my day!though引导让步状语从句;另外,Without hesitation, got separated from,however, due to,By giving的运用为文章增色添彩。