Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你校的英文报纸最近开设了“我最喜欢的校园活动（My Favorite Campus activity）” 专栏，请你给你的美国朋友Tom写一封电子邮件，向他约稿，介绍他最喜欢的校园活动。要点如下：

1. 专栏内容介绍

2. 向Tom约稿

参考词汇：专栏column

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

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Answer 1

【答案】One possible version

Dear Tom,

How are you doing? I am delighted to tell you that our school paper opened a new column called My Favorite Campus activity. This column is intended for students to voice their opinions about campus activities and how they benefit from these activities.

We also welcome articles from students in other countries to get a global view of what students do in their schools. So I am writing this letter to invite you to contribute an article to this column. I believe you also have a colorful school life and take part in many campus activities. What is your favorite activity? What is it like? Why is it your favorite?

We will be very happy to get to know something about your school and your school life.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。内容是向你的美国朋友Tom约稿，要求他介绍他最喜欢的校园活动。题目已给出提纲要点，根据要点文章可分两段来写，第一段询问朋友近况，并介绍自己的专栏内容；第二段向Tom约稿，并说明稿件要求。成文时要注意：1.文章主要用第一人称；2.时态：一般现在时为主；3.文章的内容要点要齐全；4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次；5.注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅。6.注意文章的字数控制，100单词左右。

【亮点说明】

本篇范文结构合理，行文流畅。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句及过去分词作后置定语I am delighted to tell you that our school paper opened a new column called My Favorite Campus activity.；名词性从句We also welcome articles from students in other countries to get a global view of what students do in their schools.这些体现了作者较高的语言运用能力。此外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。