题目内容
19.假设学校即将举行运动会,你将代表班级参赛.请参考下表中教练所制定的体能训练项目和营养食谱写一篇100字左右的英语短文对队友们谈谈你的训练计划和你对参赛结果的预期.请注意勿在文中显示真实校名.Physical training | 1.hours of training/increased 2.strength-training exercise/lifting weights 3.hours of sleep every night/8 |
Food | 1.beef,meat and fish 2.vegetables and fruit 3.water and soft drinks |
Your hopes | …. |
分析 根据提示信息可以判断文章应用一般现在时和将来时态,使用第一人称.而且文章需包括三个方面内容,即介绍自己制定的体能训练项目、介绍自己制定的营养食谱,最后提出自己的希望.写作时要根据表中所列的信息进行适当发挥想象,以使文章内容丰满.在希望方面可以发挥的想象是:希望队友们严格按照要求进行训练,希望大家在比赛中取得好成绩等等.在写作时要使用恰当的连接词把提示信息有效连接起来,使文章语言通顺流畅,上下文衔接紧凑.此外,在写作时还要注意使用高级词汇和多种句式表达,比如分词短语,独立主格等等.
【亮点说明】本篇范文短小精悍,结构紧凑,要点全面,语言通顺流畅,时态人称使用正确,很好的完成了写作任务.在谋篇布局方面作者采用了经典的三段式,首先提出写作目的,然后介绍自己的训练计划,最后表达了自己的希望,这种结构安排使文章脉络清晰,一目了然.作者在文中还使用了therefore,first of all,besides,as for,in a word等起连接作用的词汇短语,使文章内容更具有层次感,避免了内容的杂乱无章.此外除了定语从句which are rich in vitamins.外,作者在文中大量运用短语,比如不定式短语to stay energetic.,介词短语of great help,as well as等既增添了句式结构的变化,又给人一种清爽的感觉,使文章读起来朗朗上口.
解答 The school sports meet is coming.I feel it so excited to compete in running for my class.Therefore,I have made a training schedule for myself.
First of all,hours of physical training should be increased to improve my speed.(高分句型)I will have some strength-training exercise such as lifting weights.Besides,it is necessary for me to have an eight hours'sleep every night to stay energetic.(高分句型) As for food,beef,meat and fish are of great help.You'd better eat more vegetable as well as fruit which are rich in vitamins.(高分句型) I can drink water and soft drinks.
In a word,I'll carry out the schedule as planned.I am sure to win a gold medal for my class.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
一些同学的观点 | 另一些同学的观点 |
街头艺人应该经过一定的考核程序持证表演,那么他们的表演会更专业更安心. 假冒艺人减少,社会秩序也会更稳定… | 街头艺人为了生存而表演,没有必要持证. 群众需要各种艺人来丰富业余生活,不应该对他们进行限制… |
你的观点:… |
2.词数120词左右.
参考词汇:程序procedure 稳定的stable 假冒者pretender
Recently,a class in Shanghai has held a discussion about whether street artists should perform with a license on the street.The opinions are different.Recently,a class in Shanghai has held a discussion about whether street artists should perform with a license on the street.The opinions are different.
Some students think it quite necessary to obtain a performing license after a series of procedures.With a license,more professional street artists will show off their talents at ease without worrying about being driven away.(高分句型)Besides,the number of pretenders will naturally be reduced so that the social order will tend to be stable.
On the other hand,others hold the opposite view.In their opinion,most street artists perform just to support themselves,so it is unreasonable to be too strict with them.(高分句型) If the government limits them too much,they can't have access to an ordinary life easily.In addition,our life is greatly enriched by the different performances of street artists.
As for me,I am in favor of the regulated performance,as people nowadays have a higher level in appreciation of arts.(高分句型).
These two special days are celebrated in many different ways.On Mother's Day people wear carnations.A.red one stands for a living mother.A.white one shows that the mother is dead.Many people attend religious services(宗教仪式)to honor parents.It is also a day when people whose parents are dead visit their graves(坟).On these days,families get together at home and in restaurants.They often have outdoor BBQs for Father's Day.These are days of fun and good feelings and memories.
Another tradition is to give cards and gifts.Children make them in school.Many people make their own presents.These are valued more than the ones bought in stores.It is not the value of the gift that is important,but it is"the thought that counts".Greeting card stores,florists,candy makers,bakeries,telephones companies and other stores do a lot of business during these holidays.
(71)Two special days
Types | ●Mother's Day ●(72)Father's Day |
(73)Aim/Purpose | to show love and respect for parents. |
Common points | offer a chance to think about (74)the changing roles |
(75)ways of celebrating | ●wearing carnations on Mother's Day. ●(76)attendingreligious services to honor parents. ●(77)visitingparents'graves ●(78)getting togetherat home and in restaurant. ●(79)having outdoor BBQs |
(80)Tradition | Giving cards and gifts to parents. |
【写作内容】
请根据以下信息,用英语写一篇人物介绍:
姓名 | 莫言 |
国籍 | 中国 |
出生地 | 山东省 |
出生日期 | 1955年2月17日 |
职业 | 作家 |
简历 | ◇童年时在家乡小学读书,后辍学 ◇在农村劳动多年,最开始是在农田,之后是在工厂工作,当过兵 ◇1981年开始创作,之后发表了许多作品比如《蛙》 |
主要成就 | 获得2012年度诺贝尔文学奖,成为该奖项的首位中国籍作家 |
【写作要求】
只能用5个句子表达全部内容.
【评分标准】
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯.
报纸名称及使用语言 | 21st Century 英文报纸 |
出版地点及出版周期 | 北京 每周一期 |
版面内容 | 每周新闻、今日世界、语言课堂,体育与音乐、学生报导 |
特色 | 图文并茂 |
目的 | 学习英语词汇,提高英语水平,获取各种信息 |
效果 | 广为人知,深受喜爱 |
-________,let's go and see him.( )
A. | What's more | B. | If so | C. | Where possible | D. | When necessary |
--____________?Haven't we agreed on it?( )
A. | What is it | B. | Why don't you | ||
C. | What do you think | D. | How is it |