Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡（Singapore）举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封信申请参加。

内容主要包括：

1. 自我介绍（包括英语能力）；

2. 参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）；

3. 希望获准。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 参考词汇：夏令营-summer camp

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I learned from the Internet that you are organizing a summer camp in Singapore, which welcomes students from all over the world. I am very interested in the camp and eager to take part in it. I have been learning English for more than 10 years, and I can communicate with people in fluent English. Meanwhile, I regard this camp as a golden opportunity for me to introduce my motherland, China, to my overseas counterparts and get to know about their countries as well. I hope I will get admitted to your camp.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Regards,

Li Hua

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【解析】

试题分析：假设你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡（Singapore）举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封信申请参加。内容主要包括：1. 自我介绍（包括英语能力）；2. 参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）；3. 希望获准。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】这是一篇申请信，语言精练，包含所有要表达的内容。I learned from the Internet that you are organizing a summer camp in Singapore, which welcomes students from all over the world.本句中宾语从句和非限制性定语从句完美结合；I have been learning English for more than 10 years,现在完成进行时态运用得当；另外，communicate with，Meanwhile, regard this camp as，looking forward to为文章增色添彩。