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2．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：l．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第1l处起）不计分．
My mom and I am fighting．We used to get up so well．But these days，she has been arguing with me about me not come home．She thinks I should spend more time help her with the housework instead going out a lot．In her eyes，I'm just a lazy boy whom only loves playing．The fact is that some of my friends and I are going to different school soon．so I want to spend as much time as I can with her now．I know I should try to understand the situation from her point of a view．
But I hope she can understand what important these friends are to me．

分析 短文讲述了作者和妈妈之间的矛盾．原本相处很好的母子俩最近掀起了战争，妈妈认为孩子应该多一些时间在家里帮她做做家务，作者却认为一些同学就要分开去不同的学校了，想和同学尽可能的多度过一些时间．作者理解妈妈的心情，但更希望妈妈也能理解好朋友对他的重要性．

解答 My mom and I amfighting．We used to get up so well．But these days，she has been arguing with me about me not come home．She thinks I should spend 
                       are                                    on                                                                                            my       coming
more time help her with the housework instead∧going out a lot．In her eyes，I'm just a lazy boy whom only loves playing．The fact is that some of my friends
              helping                                           of                                                                         who
and I are going to different schoolsoon．so I want to spend as much time as I can with hernow．I know I should try to understand the situation from her point
                                       schools                                                                             them 
of a view．
      But I hope she can understand whatimportant these friends are to me．
                                                   how

1．am 改为are；考查系动词，句子主语是mom and I，两个人，所以用复数are．
2．up改为on；考查介词，这里是固定搭配get on well （with）…与…相处很好．
3．me改为my； 考查代词，这里用形容词性物主代词修饰后面的名词性短语not coming home．
4．come改为coming；考查动名词，这里与前面的my 一起作介词aboutd的宾语．
5．help改为helping； 考查动名词，spend time （in） doing 是固定搭配，意为"花费时间做某事"．
6．instead 后面加of； 考查介词，instead of是固定搭配，后跟名词或动名词，意为"而不是"．
7．whom改为who； 考查关系代词，在宾语从句中whom作作宾格，who用作主格，这里的宾语从句缺少主语，所以用who．
8．school改为schools；different不同的，后面跟名词复数．
9．her改为them；考查代词，这里代指上句中的my friends，所以用them．
10．what改为how；考查疑问副词，这里用how表示程度．

点评 短文改错时首先要掌握短文的中心思想，然后根据上下文语境，分析句式结构，利用所掌握的词汇，语法等基础知识找出错误加以改正．

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