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【题目】假如你是李华,上周日你参加了你的好友交换生Tom的生日晚会,奢侈的场面让你非常惊讶。请你针对此现象写一封信给他,谈谈你的看法,内容包括:

1.过 张,浪 重;

2.喧 久,干 人;

3.生日晚会的真正意义。

注意: 1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当发挥,使得上下文连贯;

3.开头已写好,不计入总数。

参考词汇:奢侈的luxurious 铺张的extravagant

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to have attended your birthday party last Sunday.

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Yours

Li Hua

【答案】

One possible version

Dear Tom

I’m glad to have attended your birthday party last Sunday. It was a big party indeed. But I have to say it was the most luxurious birthday party Id ever attended.

For us teenagers there is no need to be that extravagant because we mainly get living expenses from our parents. And it is shameful to waste much of the food. What’s morethe party with loud noise went on late into the nightwhich bothered the neighborhood.

To my mindthe meaning of the birthday party lies in sharing the pleasure of our growth with our friends. It’s great fun to get togetherfor the feelings instead of for the expensive food and splendid decorations.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析:本篇书面表达属于提纲作文,根据提示信息来写一封信表达对生日聚会的看法。要点如下:1.过 张,浪 重;2.喧 久,干 人;3.生日晚会的真正意义。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的三个方面的内容进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时。 以第一人称为主。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如定语从句I’d ever attendedwhich bothered the neighborhood和句式there is no need to be that extravagant because ... 此外还使用了短语如lies ininstead of等。What’s more, and 的使用使文章内容更具有层次感,也使语言更加连贯。

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A. Later I received 50 cents an hour.

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C. I ended my selling a record amount of cosmetics.

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