Question

【题目】假如你们学校“英语爱好者俱乐部”将对“健康话题”进行讨论。请根据下列提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。内容要应包括：

1.陈述部分同学的不良饮食习惯

2.良好的饮食习惯包括内容有哪些

3.个人对于健康饮食的看法

参考词汇:偏食be particular about food;零食snack; 要求字数120左右

Dear friends,

As we all know, we are what we eat.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear friends,

As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some like to have snacks; some others are particular about food; and still some eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health.

To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, we’d better have meals regularly.

In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于发言稿，根据提示信息和要求来写作。写作时注意以下几点：1. 仔细题目中有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2. 要依据图中提示信息，按照一定逻辑关系来写。写发言稿时要注意提示所给的要点有逻辑顺序的表达。3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时。 4. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。5. 发言稿应该注意有号召力，语言适用于公共场合的演讲，能够让大家产生共鸣。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，文中第一段陈述了部分同学的不良饮食习惯，第二段介绍了良好的饮食习惯所包括的内容，最后第三段阐述了作者自己对于健康饮食的看法。与此同时，文章使用了多种句式和结构。比如As we all know, Therefore, However, Besides等插入语，使文章内容更具有层次感，语言流畅。另外，句式多样化，在Therefore, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. 中用it做形式主语防止整句头重脚轻；To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food.是复杂的定语从句的运用；Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.是Only引导的倒装句。此外，文章还使用了大量短语are particular about, do harm to, as well as, In my opinion, build up等，使文章文采斐然，在公共场合中发言十分具有号召力。