Question

17．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
There are various kind of theme parks in the world．Some parks are famous for having the biggest or long roller coasters．But the theme park you are probable most familiar with is Disneyland，at which can be found throughout the world．It can bring you into the magical world．No wonder tourism is increased wherever there is a Disneyland．Other theme park is Dollywood．Its main attraction is it's culture．You can see beautiful bald eagles in the world's largest bald eagle preserve．If you want experience the ancient days and great deeds of English knights and ladies，princes and queens，you can go to Camelot Park．And there you can learn what people in ancient England ran their farms and took care of their animals．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要介绍各种形式的主题公园．最著名的要数世界各地可以看到的迪斯尼乐园．另一个是Dollywood．你还可以在世界上最大的秃鹰保护区看美丽的秃鹰，也可以去Camelot Park了解古英国人是如何经营农场和照看动物的．

解答 There are various kind of theme parks in the world．Some parks are famous for having the biggest or long roller coasters．But the theme park you are probable most familiar with is Disneyland，at which can be found throughout the world．It can bring you into the magical world．No wonder tourism is increased wherever there is a Disneyland．Other theme park is Dollywood．Its main attraction isit's culture．You can see beautiful bald eagles in the world's largest bald eagle preserve．If you want∧experience the ancient days and great deeds of English knights and ladies，princes and queens，you can go to Camelot Park．And there you can learn what people in ancient England ran their farms and took care of their animals．
详解：
1．kind改为kinds 考查名词复数．kind是可数名词，其前有various修饰时用复数形式．
2．long改为longest 考查形容词最高级．or是选择连词，它前后连接两个相同的语法成分，biggest和longest都是形容词最高级作定语．
3．去掉But 考查连词．在英语中，两个分句要用连词连接，在已经有which连接句子的情况下，but是多余的，要去掉．
4．probable改为probably 考查副词．修饰句子要用副词形式．
5．去掉at 考查介词．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词Disneyland在从句中作主语，其前不需要介词at．
6．increased改为increasing 考查动词时态．tourism与increase之间是主谓关系，用现在进行时态．
7．Other改为Another 考查形容词．根据句意：另一个主题公园是Dollywood．another意为"（人，事物）又一个的，再一个的"，other意为"其他的；别的"．
8．it's改为its 考查句子结构．分析句子结构，句中已有动词is，culture是名词，其前用形容词性物主代词作定语．
9．加to 考查动词不定式．want后接动词时用动词不定式形式．
10．what改为how 考查连词．learn后接的宾语从句缺少方式状语，用how引导宾语从句．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．