题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,于2017年3月25日搭乘国外某航空公司航班(flight number BA793)回国后,发现遗失了一个行李箱(suitcase)。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信,请他们帮你寻找。
新建要点包括:
1.陈述写信原因;
2.简要描述该行李
3.说明其重要性
4.期待回复并表示感谢。 注意:1.词数100左右;2.信件格式已为你给出。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam
My name is Li Hua,and I took your flight on March 25,2017.I was quite satisfied with your service,but when I arrived at the destination,I found my suitcase lost .So I am writing the letter hoping to get your help to find my suitcase.My suitcase is a big black one with a long handle.It is very important to me,because both my ID card and passport are in it.In addition,it also contains some confidential documents of my company.Once they are lost,it will cause damage to my company.I will appreciate it very much if you can help me oout with this situation.
Looking forward to your reply
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:试题为应用文中的书信写作,试题只给出写作框架,并未给出所有的具体写作细节,为半开放性写作。写好此文,需注意三点:一是写信格式要准确,信的开头已经给出,但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当,本文应重点写的是对箱子的描述。三要注意适当地增加细节,恰当地使用连接过渡词,以使行文连贯。另外,在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。
【亮点说明】本文是一篇书信,文章格式正确,要点齐全,写作层次清晰,紧扣要点框架并适当添加细节,行文连贯,句式多变,能够正确运用各种复合句,对箱子的描述恰当得体。I was quite satisfied with your service,but when I arrived at the destination,I found my suitcase lost .句中包含转折连词but,when引导的时间状语从句和省略that的定语从句;It is very important to me,because both my ID card and passport are in it.because引导原因状语从句;Once they are lost,it will cause damage to my company.once引导条件状语从句;I will appreciate it very much if you can help me oout with this situation.含if条件句的固定句式用在句中;另外,In addition,的运用显得格外耀眼。