Question

【题目】下列短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用划线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1、每句不超过两个错误；

2、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

3、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

As for myself, it isn’t difficult to grow into a responsible member of society. I still remember an accident that takes place on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to school and was waiting the green light at a crossroad when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, it drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to a girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Fortunately, she was not badly injured but we sent her to the nearest hospital. Comparing with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did. As a member of society, I am aware of that being responsible is that it takes to make a better society.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】添加up

【2】takes→took

【3】添加for

【4】crossroad→crossroads

【5】it→which

【6】a →the

【7】but→and

【8】comparing→compared

【9】去掉of

【10】that →what

【解析】

【1】添加up 考查短语 此处应该表示的是成长为一名有责任的人并不难，故需要用短语“grow up into”；

【2】takes→took 考查动词的时态。我记得这件事发生在一个下雨的周日下午。事发生在过去，故用一般过去时；

【3】添加for 考查固定搭配。Wait for sth等待某事；

【4】crossroad→crossroads 考查介词短语 “at a crossroads”表示“在一十字路口”；

【5】it→which 考查定语从句连接词。Which指代 a passing car；

【6】a →the 考查冠词 the girl上文已经提到过，表示特指；

【7】but→and 考查连词；句意上，幸运地是她伤的不重并且我们送她去了最近的医院，两个句子是并列关系；

【8】comparing→compared 考查非谓语动词 “与…相比”要用compared to/with；

【9】去掉of 考查固定短语 be aware of sth 意识到某事；be aware that 后面加句子。

【10】that →what 考查表语从句 句意: 做为社会的一员，我意识到，责任正是这个社会所需要的。