Question

19．假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国笔友名字叫Tom，来信反映他在上个月学校举办的运动会上成绩不佳，心情不太好．来信征求你的建议．请你根据以下要点给他回封信：
1．分析原因；
2．你的建议 （如乐观的人生态度、坚持锻炼、努力学习等）．
注意：
1．词数120-150；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Tom，
Yours．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们给因上个月学校举办的运动会上成绩不佳，心情不太好的李华回封信，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时，内容要点包括：分析原因；你的建议 （如乐观的人生态度、坚持锻炼、努力学习等）．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为原因分析．第二部分为作者的建议．
重点短语与句型：
 as follows 如下
be busy with  忙于做某事
On the other hand另一方面
 take sth seriously认真，严肃对待
高分句型一：Last month，your school held the sports meet where almost half of the students in our class competed，even if some of them were not very good at it．此句用了where引导的定语从句及even if 引导的状语从句
高分句型二：We should have an optimistic attitude towards life and do exercises regularly，spending most of time in studying．此句用了分词spending作伴随状语

解答 Last month，your school held the sports meet where almost half of the students in our class competed，even if some of them were not very good at it（高分句型一）．The reasons why you didn't behave well is as follows．On the one hand，most of you were busy with your study in daily life，so you hardly had time to exercise．On the other hand，your expectations for the games are too high．You want to prove yourself  with the result of the sports meet．Last but not least，maybe you lack the spirit of unity，which led to the poor performance．（原因分析）
As far as I am concerned，participating in the game is more important than result．We needn't take the result very seriously．We should have an optimistic attitude towards life and do exercises regularly，spending most of  time in studying．（高分句型二）（作者的建议）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．