Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I was very happy because I go kite flying with my friends yesterday. It was sun, and when the wind came, we all went to the park. My father bought the kites to us. When we arrived the park, we took out our kites. My was a butterfly and my two friend both had birds. I tried to fly my kite, and I couldn’t. So I ran the faster and faster, and then my kite finally flew. A few minutes later, my friends’ kites was also flying. Seeing our kites flying, we all felt very happily.

Answer 1

【答案】1. go kite flying went

2. It was sun sunny

3. the kites to us for

4. arrived ∧the park at

5. My was a …… Mine

6. two friend friends

7. and I couldn’t but

8. I ran 后去掉the

9. kites was also…… were

10. very happily happy

【解析】1.根据yesterday可知句子用一般过去时态，故把go---went。

2.句意：天气是阳光明媚的。此处是形容词做表语，故把sun---sunny。

3.buy sb. for sth.为某人买某物，故把to---for。

4.固定搭配：arrive in+大地点；arrive at+小地点，“到达公园”，根据句意可知在arrive后面加at。

5.句意：我的是一个蝴蝶。从前文知道这里指的是“我的风筝”，所以用名词性物主代词，故把My---Mine。

6.句意：两个朋友。用名词复数形式，故把friend ---friends。

7.句意：我尽量地放我的风筝，但是我不能。根据句意可只能把and---but。

8.句意：我跑的越来越快。此处是并列的副词比较级，故把the去掉。

9.此处kites是复数形式，故把后面的谓语动词was---were。

10.句意：我们都感到非常高兴。此处felt是连系动词，所以后面用形容词做表语，故把happily ---happy。