Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校组建了游泳俱乐部。请给你的留学生朋友peter写信，邀请他加入。内容包括：

1.组建俱乐部的目的；

2.俱乐部的主要活动；

3.报名的时间和地点；

注意：1.词数100 左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

开头语和结束语己为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,

How is everything going?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

How is everything going?I'm writing to tell you some good news.A swimming club has been founded in our school,which aims at enriching our after-class life.Since you are crazy about swimming,I'd like to invite you to join us.

Club members meet every Friday afternoon for mass learning.Regular courses are provided on how to develop life skills by swimming.And chances are also available for exchange activities.

If you're interested,please turn to the student union office,which is situated at the east end on the ground floor of the office building:It opens from 3:00 to 6:00 pm on weekdays.

I'm looking forward to your quick reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，邀请留学生朋友peter加入校游泳俱乐部。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

要求内容包括：1. 组建俱乐部的目的；2.俱乐部的主要活动；3.报名的时间和地点

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

tell sb. sth.; good news; found; aim at doing; enrich; be crazy about; invite sb. to do; mass learning; regular courses; develop life skills; available; turn to; the student union; be situated at; look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1.I’m writing to tell you some good news.

2.A swimming club has been founded in our school, which aims at enriching our after-class life.

3.Since you are crazy about swimming, I’d like to invite you to join us.

4.Club members meet every Friday afternoon for mass learning.

5.Regular courses are provided on how to develop life skills by swimming.

6.And chances are also available for exchange activities.

7.If you’re interested, please turn to the student union office, which is situated at the east end on the ground floor of the office building: It opens from 3:00 to 6:00 pm on weekdays.

8.I’m looking forward to your quick reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改