题目内容
17.假定你是李华,你得知你的美国朋友Tom正在学习中文,并且遇到一些困难.请根据以下提示给Tom写一封电子邮件,告诉他一些学习中文的方法:1.写信目的;
2.相关建议;
3.你的希望.
注意:词数100左右;可适当增加细节以使行文连贯.
Dear Tom.
分析 这是关于学习中文的方法的作文.根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态.内容包括:一 写信目的;二学习中文的方法;三希望.
高分句型:
1.It's true that Chinese is not easy to learn,but there is no need to feel worried.句子里It做形式主语,代指that 引导的主语从句;but连接并列句there is no need to 表示"没有必要去做".
汉语是真的不容易学习,但是也没有必要感到焦虑.
2.As far as I am concerned,it's important that you choose a good teacher who knows the difference between the two languages.句子里As far as I am concerned表示"就我而言";It做形式主语,代指that 引导的主语从句;who引导定语从句代指先行词a good teacher.
我认为你选择一个知道两种语言不同点的老师很重要.
解答 Dear Tom
I am happy to know that you are beginning to learn Chinese.It's true that Chinese is not easy to learn,but there is no need to feel worried.【高分句型一】I will give you some advice.(写信目的)
As far as I am concerned,it's important that you choose a good teacher who knows the difference between the two languages.【高分句型二】Most importantly,you should always keep in mind thatyou must have confidence in yourself.Don't be frightened by the seemingly hard task.Break your main task into smaller goals and you will realize your dream in the end.(学习中文的方法)
Hope you will be getting on better with your Chinese.(希 望)
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 考查提纲类作文.
写作文时,一定要切题,抓住中心,紧扣要点.不要任意发挥,画蛇添足,也不要丢三落四,要点不全.通过对众多提示或图画、图表的观察和分析,获取与写作内容有关的主要信息,并按一定的逻辑顺序排列起来,找出最密切相关的要点,列出写作提纲.
-________ It has cost me several nights'sleep.( )
A. | What a relief! | B. | What a shame! | C. | How come? | D. | How so? |
存在问题 | 1.词汇语法运用不够准确 |
2.篇章结构不够清晰 | |
3.… | |
原因分析 | 1.思想上不够重视 |
2.训练形式不够多样 | |
3.… | |
改进措施 | (请根据自己的经历或感想,提出至少两种措施) |
1.对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译.
2.词数150左右.
3.作文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等.