题目内容
11.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,上个月赴美参加夏令营,回国后收到寄宿家庭Mr.Smith的一封信.请给Mr.Smith写一封回信,向他表示感谢.内容包括:1.感谢他寄来的照片;
2.告诉他你最喜欢的照片及原因;
3.欢迎他们全家来北京.
注意:1.词数不少于50;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Mr.Smith,
Dear Mr.Smith,
I'm glad to receive your letter and want to express my thanks for the photos you sent me.(高分句型)
All the photos are beautiful.My family and I appreciate them a lot.One of my favorite photos is the one at my birthday party youtook for me.I was blowing candles happily.It is the best remembrance of my trip to America.I'm really grateful for everything.(高分句型)
I hope that someday you can come to Beijing.I would like to show you around my hometown.Please give my respects to all your family.(高分句型)
Sincerely,
Li Hua
Sincerely,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于英文书信,根据提示信息回国后收到寄宿家庭Mr.Smith的一封信.请给Mr.Smith写一封回信,向他表示感谢.写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:感谢他寄来的照片;告诉他你最喜欢的照片及原因;欢迎他们全家来北京.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般过去时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:my favorite photos我最喜欢的照片;the best remembrance of my trip 旅行的最好回忆;be grateful for 对…的感激
解答 Dear Mr.Smith,
I'm glad to receive your letter and want to express my thanks for the photos you sent me.(高分句型)
All the photos are beautiful.My family and I appreciate them a lot.One of my favorite photos is the one at my birthday party you took for me.I was blowing candles happily.It is the best remembrance of my trip to America.I'm really grateful for everything.(高分句型)
I hope that someday you can come to Beijing.I would like to show you around my hometown.Please give my respects to all your family.(高分句型)
Sincerely,
Li Hua
点评 提纲类写作的文章较开放式的文体,比较好写.学生在写作的过程中,首先思路要清晰,要对所表达的句子通顺的说出来,遇到不会的要学会替换所用语,来达到同样的意思.在每一篇作文中,对于表达观点的句子,都要用上起承转合的连词来加强文章的层次感,适当运用俗语,运用平时常用的句式来使文章富有变化,表达地道得体.
A. | will come | B. | came | C. | comes | D. | is coming |
A. | intelligence | B. | reputation | C. | responsibility | D. | impression |
A. | distant | B. | familiar | C. | close | D. | noble |