题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,一批外国交流生将来你校学习一周。为帮助他们尽快适应学校生活,校学生会将举办一场欢迎晚会。请你代表学生会用英语在晚会上简短致词,内容包括:
1.表示热烈欢迎;
2.学校课外活动;
3.体验活动:体验海南文化特色如观看琼剧,品尝美食等。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,使行文流畅。
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【答案】Dear friends,
On behalf of the Student Union, I heartily welcome you to our school.
In the following week, you are scheduled to explore more about a wide range of extracurricular activities such as singing, dancing, drama and martial arts competitions in our school. Meanwhile, various cultural activities will be participated so that you can feast your eyes to local features like Qiong Opera and Ms. Xian Cultural Festival. No doubt you’ll all be impressed.
Moreover, Hainan snacks and tropical fruits enjoy great popularity worldwide. I strongly recommend you to get involved and wish you an enjoyable stay in Hainan.
Thank you.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封欢迎词。
第一步:
审题:欢迎词
人称:第二人称
时态:一般将来时和一般现在时
结构:总分法,分三部分,第一部分表示热烈欢迎,第二部分说明为期一周的活动安排,第三部分希望他们在海南过得愉快。
要点:
1. 表示热烈欢迎
2.说明为期一周的活动安排
①参加学校的课外活动:唱歌、跳舞、戏剧表演、武术比赛
②体验活动:体验海南文化特色,观看琼剧、品尝当地菜肴、热带水果
3.希望他们在海南过得愉快。
第二步:列提纲(重点词汇、短语)
on behalf of;express one’s heartily welcome to sb.;experience;a wide range of;extracurricular activities;have the chance to do…;participate in;enjoy great popularity;recommend;feast one’s eyes on;an enjoyable stay
第三步:连词成句
(1)I express my heartily welcome to you.
(2) You are to experience a wide range of extracurricular activities.
(3) Extracurricular activities include singing, dancing, drama performance and martial arts competitions
(4) You will have the chance to participate in various cultural activities.
(5) Hainan snacks and tropical fruits enjoy great popularity worldwide.
(6) I recommend you to taste delicious local cuisines.
(7)I am sure you will feast your eyes on local features.
(8)Wish you an enjoyable stay in Hainan.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型,注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
表示时间顺序: first of all, to begin/start with , in the beginning
firstly.... secondly .... lastly / finally/in the end
表示并列或补充关系: what is more; besides, moreover, apart from;
in addition, as well as;not only…but(also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others
表示转折对比关系:but, however, although, though, yet, while
on one hand…on the other hand ...,
表示因果关系:because, as, therefore, as a result, as a consequence, consequently, thus
连句成文,运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,使句与句之间逻辑性更强、段与段之间结构清晰。