题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你乘坐时空机器穿越到过去和未来之后又回到现在。请你写一篇演讲稿,与同学们简要谈谈你的所见所感。内容包括
注意1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Boys and girls, good afternoon! I’m excited to stand here to share the travel into the past and the future with my Time Machine.
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Thank you!
【答案】 Boys and girls, good afternoon! I’m excited to stand here to share the travel into the past and the future with my Time Machine.
Back to the past, I witnessed Alexander the Great king defeating cities and states, causing pain and death and the Loulan Kingdom, different from what you have seen now, was an ecological and livable state. What a terrible sight I saw in the distant future! I never dreamed, as human beings, the Morlocks should have killed and eaten the Eloi cruelly and greedily instead of living in harmony. When going further into the future, I found there was no life or movement on the Earth.
What I have learnt from my travel is that mankind needs peace rather than war. And nature should be respected and protected.
Thank you!
【解析】
这是一篇演讲稿。内容要点罗列的很清晰,同学们只要就每个要点结合自己的历史知识恰当发挥即可。演讲稿文章组织结构要思维清晰,逻辑性强,语言要有感染力、形象生动。
第一步:审题
确定时态和人称。由于是你自己乘坐时空机器穿越到过去和未来之后又回到现在并且是你自己写一篇演讲稿,所以时态以句子情形而定,描写过去就用一般过去式,现在就用一般现在时,将来就用一般将来时。人称以第一人称为主。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
the travel into the past and the future(穿越到过去和将来的旅行);defeating cities and states(征服城市和国家);ecological and livable state(环境优美、生机勃勃的国家);living in harmony(和谐地生活);rather than(而不是);in the distant future (在遥远的将来);travel with(用……旅行)等。
第三步:遣词造句:同学们在写作时不能逐句翻译,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,同时要点表述要完整,文章要通顺,准确使用时态和语态。
第四步:连句成文:写作时要适当使用连词、过渡词和插入语,使文章浑然一体。同时恰当而合理地使用一些高级词汇和句型,如定语从句等,以提高文章档次。