题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你们学校将举办英语演讲比赛(English Speech Contest),请你根据以下要点,以校学生会的名义写一则英语演讲比赛的通知:
1.主题:未来生活;
2.时间和地点:2016年11月15日上午8:30--12:00;体育馆;
3.选手:高三年级学生;
4.评委:五名教师和一名外教;
注意:词数100左右;可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;开头语已为你写好,不计入总字数。
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The Students’ Union
【答案】We are glad to inform you that our school willhold an English Speech Contest on Nov.15th from 8:30-12:00. It will be held in the auditorium. The topic is “Life in the future”.
Those who want to take part in the contest are supposed to sign up at the office of the Students' Union before Nov.15th. Five of our teachers and one foreign teacher will be our honorable judges.
All the Grade 3 students are welcome to join in the contest. Please try your best and get ready in time.
Wish you success.
The Students’ Union
【解析】本文属于提纲类作文,要求写一则英语演讲比赛的通知。要注意通知的格式和特殊用词。考虑用用一般现在时来写。要点:1.主题:未来生活;2.时间和地点:2016年11月15日上午8:30--12:00;体育馆;3.选手:高三年级学生;4.评委:五名教师和一名外教。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如: take part in参加,sign up登记。还使用了定语从句Those who want to take part in the contest are supposed to sign up at the office of the Students' Union before Nov.15th.等多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性。
