题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假期中你外出旅游时发现许多不文明行为，如随地吐痰、乱涂乱画、乱丢垃圾等，请你给Beautiful China编辑部写一封信，呼吁人们提高素质、文明出行。
内容要点：1.你所看到的不文明行为及危害；
2．为建设美丽中国，提出你的倡议(至少两点)。
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
4．不得出现真实姓名。
注意：1.词数100～120；
参考词汇：吐痰spit；刻画 scratch；不文明行为immoral behaviors
Dear editor，
I am writing to tell you about what I saw while traveling during this winter vacation.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
One possible version：
Dear editor,
I am writing to tell you about what I saw while traveling during this winter vacation.
I was surprised to see so many immoral behaviors in public places.Some people spit at will wherever they went; some scratched their names on the street walls or other scenic spots, which did great damage to them.
In my opinion, it’s high time we should take action to help improve the situation. First, certain laws should be passed to ensure people won’t damage the environment. Second, our media should also take responsibility to guide people to protect the environment. Last but not least, we travelers should learn to be more responsible for what we did.
Only by working together can we make our country become more and more beautiful!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：本文是一篇提纲类作文写作。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】I was surprised to see so many immoral behaviors in public places.运用固定短语so many；Some people spit at will wherever they went; some scratched their names on the street walls or other scenic spots, which did great damage to them.运用定语从句；In my opinion, it’s high time we should take action to help improve the situation.运用虚拟语气；Last but not least, we travelers should learn to be more responsible for what we did.运用短语Last but not least；Second, our media should also take responsibility to guide people to protect the environment.此句式为文章增色，显得文章很有档次。
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