题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华。在即将到来的暑假里,你和几位好友计划到一贫困山村帮助那里的孩子学英语。请你发邮件询问你学校的外国交换生John是否愿意加入你们。
内容包括:1.时间、地点、目的;2.工作内容;3.需要做的准备。
注意:1. 词数100左右;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear John,
I’m Li Hua.
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John,
I am Li Hua. Together with some of my friends I am planning to go to a poor mountain village to teach the children English during the coming summer vacation. Would you like to join us?
The village is north of our city, about 300 kilometers away, with some eager children there but no English teacher. We will live there for three weeks, starting from the very beginning with ABC. Step by step, we will teach them some basic daily English. If you can go with us and offer a hand, the children will be more than happy and learn English more quickly.
You don’t need to prepare many things except some necessities, but books for children, if any, will be highly appreciated.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本文属于应用文中的书信,要求考生以李华的身份询问交换生John是否愿意加入你们一起到贫困山区帮助孩子学习英语的活动。范文很好地完成了文字要求所有任务,涵盖了所有的要点。在范文中作者尽量使用了较多的高级结构,如分词做状语,如We will live there for three weeks, starting from the very beginning with ABC.同时句中还使用了省略句if any。这些高级句式的使用给文字增加了亮点。