Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

I should be very pleasant if you could come to my home and stay us for a few days in the summer holidays. My native village is much beautiful. I can imagine the time when we are going to spend together. Every morning they should take a walk in the neighboring hills, which we can enjoy the fresh air and sweet songs singing by the birds. In the afternoon, we shall go for swim in the river. At night we shall sit in the yard, chatting and observe the stars in the sky. Please let me know how you think about the plan. I do look forward to your coming to my home.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】pleasant---pleased

【2】stay us--- stay with us

【3】much---very

【4】time when---去掉when 或改为which/that

【5】they---- we

【6】which---where

【7】singing---sung

【8】for swim---for a swim

【9】observe---observing

【10】how---what

【解析】

试题分析：我邀请朋友暑假到我家乡来，一起度过美好的时光。把假期的计划告诉他，征求他的想法。我期待着朋友的光临。

【1】pleasant指人心满意足的愉快，pleased则指喜悦的，感到高兴的；由上下文可知，“我”感到高兴，故pleasant---pleased。

【2】stay with sb和…….呆在一起，故stay后面加with。

【3】much修饰不可数名词，修饰形容词用very,故much---very。

【4】定语从句we are going to spend together修饰先行词time，time在定语从句we are going to spend together中是spend的宾语，应用关系代词that/which,或者省略，故去掉when 或改为which/that。

【5】由上下文可知，都是说的作者和朋友，故此处they---- we。

【6】此处非限制性定语从句修饰的先行词hills在从句中做地点状语，故which---where。

【7】此处songs是由birds唱的，故singing---sung。

【8】go for a + 名词，表示“去…….”,故for swim---for a swim。

【9】and前后应该一致，故observe---observing。

【10】what do you think about/of sth你认为…….，故 how---what。