Question

【题目】最近一段时间我国多个地方出现雾霾天气，极大地影响了人们的健康与生活。因此你想以此为话题，写一篇通讯稿。应包括以下要点：

1. 对生活造成的影响； 2. 建议采取的措施

要求：1. 词数 100 - 120； 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：雾霾haze 雾霾天气hazy weather

Recently hazy weather has occurred in many areas of China._______________

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible student version:

Recently hazy weather has occurred in many areas of China, which has great harm to our daily life. And it has become a growing concern throughout the country.

It’s obvious that hazy weather has many negative effects. First of all, people’s health is threatened and some of them even suffer from diseases such as coughing. In addition, more traffic jams and more accidents arise from it, which in turn disturbs people’s normal life.

Faced with this situation, we are supposed to raise the awareness of environmental protection. Not only should we stop sending out harmful gases, but more energy should be saved in our daily life. Meanwhile, importance should be attached to planting trees. Only when we take effective measures, will our environment make a difference.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇议论文，通过本文说明雾霾的危害和我们应该采取的措施。应该用一般现在时，注意句式的变化和高级词汇的运用。最好用一些短语和固定句式。还需要注意句子之间的衔接。

【亮点说明】本文运用了一些高级的句式和词汇，为文章增添了色彩。如非限制性定语从句which has great harm to our daily life. 还有 主语从句It’s obvious that hazy weather has many negative effects.以及非谓语

Faced with this situation, we are supposed to raise the awareness of environmental protection. 和倒装句Not only should we stop sending out harmful gases, but more energy should be saved in our daily life. Only when we take effective measures, will our environment make a difference.和 Meanwhile, attached to 等。