Question

7．假定你是李华．你的美国笔友Mike 将到广州度假，以下是他给你发的电子邮件．请给他回信，欢迎他的到来，答复他的疑问，并提出合理建议．

Dear Li Hua， I'm going to Guangzhou for a 2-week holiday in May．I'm so excited that I finally have this chance to meet you and see your city．However，I am a bit worried about the traffic problems．From what I know，traffic jams are serious in big cities．Do you think I should rent a car？How should I travel around efficiently when I'm in Guangzhou？ Can't wait to see you． Yours， Mike

注意：
1词数100左右；
2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
There are many options available getting around Guangzhou．When you just want to travel around the downtown area，I suggest that you hire a street bike．They are everywhere and best of all when you finish you can leave the bike where you like．We also have an excellent metro system and bus service．I recommend that you avoid using the buses as much as possible，as traffic jams are pretty common，especially during rush hour．The metro should be perfect for most places．If you want to go to the suburbs or countryside my father can drive us or you can even use one of the many car-hire services available．Looking forward to seeing you in Guangzhou．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
亮点句型一：I recommend that you avoid using the buses as much as possible，as traffic jams are pretty common，especially during rush hour．我建议你尽量避免使用公共汽车，因为交通堵塞很常见，尤其是在交通高峰期．本句是一个虚拟语气的句子，recommend that sb should do 其中should 可以省略．
亮点句型二：If you want to go to the suburbs or countryside my father can drive us or you can even use one of the many car-hire services available．如果你想去郊区或乡下，我的父亲可以开车送我们，或者你甚至可以使用许多租车服务之一．if引导的是条件状语从句，主句是一个并列句由my father can drive us 和you can even use one of the many car-hire services available构成．

解答 Dear Mike，
    There are many options available getting around Guangzhou．When you just want to travel around the downtown area，I suggest that you hire a street bike．They are everywhere and best of all when you finish you can leave the bike where you like．We also have an excellent metro system and bus service．I recommend that you avoid using the buses as much as possible，as traffic jams are pretty common，especially during rush hour．（亮点句型一）The metro should be perfect for most places．If you want to go to the suburbs or countryside my father can drive us or you can even use one of the many car-hire services available．（亮点句型二）Looking forward to seeing you in Guangzhou．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．