题目内容
【题目】现在很多学校严禁学生上学带手机,但是仍有许多学生把手机带到学校。请你结合此现象谈谈你的看法,并给校报英语专栏投稿。内容要点如下:
1.简述该现象;
2.谈谈带手机上学的弊端;
3.阐述你的观点。
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【答案】In recent years, many schools have taken tough measures to forbid students to bring their mobile phones to school. However,some students break this rule and some students even play with their mobile phones in class, which makes the teacher frustrated.
The disadvantages of students bringing mobile phones to school are obvious. On the one hand, mobile phones can distract students' attention. On the other hand, some students may get access to some unhealthy websites, which are bad for their development. Worse still, some students are likely to compare the brands of their mobile phones with their classmates'.
In my opinion, I strongly support banning mobile phones in schools. Only in this way can we devote more energies to our study and achieve our goals.
【解析】
本文书面表达属于应用文,要求写一篇英语稿件。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇是一篇英语稿件:现在很多学校严禁学生上学带手机,但是仍有许多学生把手机带到学校。请你结合此现象谈谈你的看法,并给校报英语专栏投稿。内容要点如下:简述该现象;谈谈带手机上学的弊端;阐述你的观点。
第2步:根据写作要求确定关键词,如:taken tough measures(采取强硬措施);break this rule(违背这条规则);distract students' attention(分散学生的注意力);achieve our goals(实现我们的目标)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。