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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Several American students visited our school. Upon our arrival, we gave a warm welcome to them, among them a boy named Tim was to stay with my family for the weekend. I recognized Tim compared him with photo he had sent to me. Tim greeted me and expressed that how excited he felt. When school was over, we took the subway home. My parents prepared a rich family dinner that night and we had enjoyed ourselves so much, eating and chatting. The next day, I act as a guide, showing Tim along the most famous scenic spots in Beijing. Wherever he went, he had some photos take to help him memorize this unforgettable trip to China. The time to say goodbye came when we realized it. I gave Tim a kite as a souvenir.

【答案】

【1】our--their

【2】them--whom

【3】compared--comparing

【4】photo前加上the

【5】去掉that

【6】had enjoyed--enjoyed

【7】act--acted

【8】along--around

【9】take--taken

【10】when--before

【解析】

试题分析:

【1】文中第二句。通过上一句可知,一些美国学生要来参观我们学校,故此句应是,他们一到达,而不是我们一到达。所以把our改成their。

【2】文中第二句。考查定语从句。此句为非限制性定语从句,先行词为them,在从句中担当among的宾语,故用whom。

【3】文中第三句。考查非谓语动词。此句为非谓语动词担当状语,和主语I之间存在主动发出的关系,故用comparing,而不是compared。

【4】文中第三句。考查冠词的用法。在此句中,名词photo后有定语从句修饰,故为特指,需要加冠词the。

【5】文中第四句。考查宾语从句的连接词。在本句中,expressed之后为宾语从句,宾语从句的连接词不可重复使用,故that和how只可以选择一个。根据后面的excited,可知用how,所以去掉that。

【6】文中第六句。根据上文的prepared可知,本句时态为一般过去时而非过去完成时。所以把had enjoyed改成enjoyed。

【7】文中第七句。根据上文可知,整件事都是发生在过去的事情,所以应该用一般过去时。所以把act改成acted。

【8】文中第七句。考查短语show around意为带领某人参观某地。并没有show along的搭配,故把along改成around。

【9】文中倒数第三句。考查非谓语动词。在本句中非谓语动词担当宾语补足语,构成结构 have sth. done,意为让。此句中,photo和take之间存在被动关系,故把take改成taken。

【10】文中倒数第二句。此句考查连词的用法。句意为:我们还没有意识到时,分别的时刻已经到来。而能够表示没来及就这个意思的连词不是when而是before。故把when改成before。

考点:考查短文纠错

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