题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假设你叫李华,是一家英文杂志社的心理咨询师。某中学生小王给你写信,提到自己偏胖,想节食减肥,征求你的意见。请你给她回一封信,谈谈你对该问题的见解。内容要点如下:
1.健康比漂亮更重要;
2.学生以学习为主,不要过于注重外貌和别人的看法;
3.可通过多锻炼身体保持健康,要改变不良的饮食习惯;
4.健康的心态也很重要。
注意: 1.短文必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥;
2.词数:100左右。
3.参考词汇:state of mind 心态
Dear Xiao Wang,
I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Xiao Wang,
I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.
It is only natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful .However,in my opinion ,health is more important than beauty.For a student, studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is the second. So do not let others’ opinions affect your normal life . However, if you do want to lose weight, it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing unhealthy eating habits. The most important thing is that you keep a healthy state of mind, as it will help with your studies, and will also help you overcome difficulties in dieting.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you and I’m looking forward to your next letter.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【解析】
试题分析:假设你叫李华,是一家英文杂志社的心理咨询师。某中学生小王给你写信,提到自己偏胖,想节食减肥,征求你的意见。请你给她回一封信,谈谈你对该问题的见解。内容要点如下:1.健康比漂亮更重要;2.学生以学习为主,不要过于注重外貌和别人的看法;3.可通过多锻炼身体保持健康,要改变不良的饮食习惯;4.健康的心态也很重要。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意: 1.短文必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥;2.词数:100左右。
【亮点说明】
I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting. 定语从句和宾语从句在句中完美结合;It is only natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful句中使用主语从句;However,in my opinion ,health is more important than beauty.形容词比较级在句中体现;For a student, studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is the second.句中巧妙使用while引导的并列句;However, if you do want to lose weight, it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing unhealthy eating habits.句中使用条件状语从句;The most important thing is that you keep a healthy state of mind, as it will help with your studies, and will also help you overcome difficulties in dieting.表语从句和原因状语从句同时出现在一句中;I hope my advice will be helpful to you and I’m looking forward to your next letter.宾语从句和并列句运用恰到好处。