题目内容
【题目】假如你是学生会主席李华,你校要举办首届英语节(English Festival)。请你以学生会的名义用英语给全校师生写一封信。信的内容主要包括:
1. 活动时间:9月26日— 9月27日;
2. 活动内容:如英文歌曲比赛、英文戏剧表演、西方文化讲座等;
3. 活动意义。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and schoolmates,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear teachers and schoolmates,
I have exciting news to share with you. The first English Festival is to be held from September 26th to 27th. This festival promises to be a feast for ears and eyes as well as minds. Students and teachers alike are welcome to participate in English singing competitions, drama performances, or attend lectures on Western culture.
By immersing everyone in the charm of English, the festival is bound to fuel your desire to be better English learners, spark your way of thinking and above all get all of you to have fun with English.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:试题为应用文中的书信写作,试题只给出写作框架,并未给出所有的具体写作细节,为半开放性写作。写好此文,需注意三点:一是写信格式要准确,信的开头已经给出,但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当,本文重点信的内容主要包括:1. 活动时间:9月26日— 9月27日;2. 活动内容:如英文歌曲比赛、英文戏剧表演、西方文化讲座等;3. 活动意义,要说明参加活动的好处,来鼓励人们参加此活动。三要注意适当地增加细节,恰当地使用连接过渡词,以使行文连贯。另外,在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。
【亮点说明】
本文是一篇书信,格式正确,内容齐全,语句精炼,结果布局合理。The first English Festival is to be held from September 26th to 27th.用动词不定式表示将来;句中使用高级词组、短语as well as,participate in,by immersing,in the charm of,be bound to do sth.,have fun with等。