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10．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
This is my fifth day at the summer camp．Life isn't exact what I expected．We have to get up early to make our beds before our teacher Miss Li come to inspect．After breakfast，we have some of free time．Yesterday morning I went fishing，but the only thing I catch was a tree branch．In the afternoon，there are different activity like horseback riding and hiking．They're fun，so nothing new for me．In the evening，everyone is assigned a different task to get dinner ready．Yesterday，I was in charge of prepare the hot dogs，but I accidentally dropped it in the fire．The best part of camp is at night，where we sit around a campfire and tell stories．
分析 本文记叙了作者参加夏令营的一系列活动．早晨起床自己整理床铺，钓鱼只能钓到树枝，参加远足等活动，自己准备热狗却不小心把它掉到火里…；通过这一系列的活动，作者意识到"Life isn't what I expected"（生活不像我所期待的那样）．
解答 1．exact改为exactly；考查副词的用法，这里应该用副词来修饰前面的动词isn't．
2．come改为comes；这里考查的是句子的时态，结合语境这里应该用一般现在时，主语是Miss Li，故用comes．
3．去掉of；考查的是介词的用法，结合上下文，句意为"一些空闲时间"，所以some后面不能加介词of．
4．catch改为caught，前面有时间状语yesterday，所以要用过去时．
5．activity改为activities；句子结构为There are…所以后面应该跟名词的复数形式．
6．so改为but；考查连词的用法，结合句意，前后应当是转折关系，故用but．
7．prepare改为preparing；考查介词用法，介词后面跟 名词或动名词构成介宾结构．
8．it改为them；考查代词的用法，这里的代词指代前面的hot dogs，所以用复数形式them．
9．of后面the；这里考查的是冠词的用法，camp前面加定冠词the，表示特指文章中前面提到的．
10．where改为when，这里考查的是定语从句中关系词的用法，先行词是night，表示时间，故用关系副词when．
点评 短文改错时要注意一下几点：1．快速阅读，整体把握短文大意．2．重视语境以及上下文的关系．3．充分运用基础语言知识找出错误所在．
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A．DIY methods for your car．
B．The importance of putting internet access in your car．
C．The way of putting a back-view system．
D．How to save money in your life？
47．What's the parents'attitude to the safety concern of car Internet access？C
A．They agree with the critics'opinion．
B．They consider it a great danger for driving．
C．They think．that talking with children is more dangerous．
D．They believe it unnecessary to have car Internet access．
48．What's the potential danger for children？B
A．Electronic equipment．
B．Backing-up car．
C．Earphones behind the wheel．
D．Highway engine failure．
49．How cart the back-view package see the back of the car？A
A．With a camera onto the side of backup light．
B．With an inner navigation system．
C．With a dashboard．
D．With a cell phone．