题目内容
10.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误仅限1词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
It was extreme cold last Monday morning.While I was walking in my way to school,I noticed two street cleaners sweeping the street.Seeing them are working so hard on such a cold morning,I was moved and made up my mind do something for them.After arriving at school,I discussed with some classmates that we could do.The next day,we got up early and preparing porridge at home.When we handed the cleaners the hot porridge and expressed us appreciation for their hard work,they looked a little surprising at first.And then they took a porridge and thanked us happily.Since it was very cold,we all felt warm at that moment.
分析 本文主要讲述作者在寒冷的天气里看到清洁工人们打扫大街,想为他们做点什么.因此,他和同学们递给清洁工热粥,向他们表达自己的感激.
解答 It was extreme cold last Monday morning.While I was walking in my way to school,I noticed two street cleaners sweeping the street.Seeing them are working so hard on such a cold morning,I was moved and made up my mind∧do something for them.After arriving at school,I discussed with some classmates that we could do.The next day,we got up early and preparing porridge at home.When we handed the cleaners the hot porridge and expressed us appreciation for their hard work,they looked a little surprising at first.And then they took a porridge and thanked us happily.Since it was very cold,we all felt warm at that moment.
详解:
1.extreme改为extremely 考查形容词.cold为形容词,应用副词修饰形容词.
2.in改为on 考查介词.on one's way to意为"在某人去…的路上",是固定搭配.
3.去掉are 考查句子结构.此处是感官动词的复合结构:感官动词+名词+doing,are是多余的.
4.mind后加to 考查动词不定式.make up one's mind to do sth.意为"下定决心做某事",是固定搭配.
5.that改为what 考查连词.do缺少宾语,用what作其宾语,同时what引导宾语从句.
6.preparing改为prepared 考查动词时态.and是并列连词,它前后连接两个相同的语法成分,got和prepared是并列谓语,都用一般过去时.
7.us改为our 考查代词.根据句意:我们递给清洁工热粥,向他们表达我们的感激.用代词our.
8.surprising改为surprised 考查过去分词. 过去分词作表语,多半用来表示人物所处的心理状态或情感变化,其主语多半是人.
9.a改为the 考查冠词.porridge因前面已提到,其前加定冠词the表示特指.
10.since改为although/though 考查连词.根据句意:尽管很冷,但那一刻我们都感觉很温暖.用连词although/though.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
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Subject:Slimming down classics? | |
Mr. Handsome 2007-5-12 6:34AM | Orion Books,which decides there is a market in creating cut-down classics (经典著作),is slimming down some novels by such great writers as L.Tolstoy,M.Mitchell and C.Bronte.Now,each of them has been whittled down to about 400pages by cutting 30to 40pages per cent of original,with words,sentences,paragraphs and,in a few cases,chapters removed.The first six shortened editions,all priced at£6.99and advertised as great reads"in half the time",will go on sale next month,with plans for 50to 100more to follow.The publishing house believes that modern readers will welcome the shorter versions. |
Mr. Edwards 2007-5-12 9:40AM | Well,I'm publisher of Orion Group.Thanks for your attention,Mr.Handsome. I must say,the idea developed from a game of"shame"in my office.Each of us was required to confess (承认) to the most embarrassing blanks in his or her reading.I admitted that I had never read Anna Karenina and tried but failed to get through Gone with the Wind several times.One of my colleagues acknowledged skipping (跳读) Jane Eyre.We realized that life is too short to read all the books you want to and we never were going to read these ones. As a leading publishing house,we are trying to make classics convenient for readers but it's not as if we're withdrawing the original versions.They are still there if you want to read them. |
Ms.Weir 2007-5-12 11:35AM | I'm director of the online book club www.lovereading.co.uk Mr.Edwards,I think your shortened editions is a breath of fresh air.I'm guilty of never having read Anna Karenina,because it's just so long.I'd much rather read two 300-page books than one 600-page book.I am looking forward to more shortened classics! |
Mr. Crockatt 2007-5-12 4:38PM | I'm from the London independent bookshop Crockatt & Powell. In my opinion,the practice is completely ridiculous.How can you edit the classics?I'm afraid reading some of these books is hard work,and that is why you have to develop as a reader.If people don't have time to read Anna Karenina,then fine.But don't read a shortened version and kid yourself it's the real thing. |
A.opposes the reading of original classics
B.is embarrassed for cutting down classics
C.thinks cut-down classics have a bright future
D.is cautious in its decision to cut down classics
26.In Mr.Edwards'opinion,Orion Group is shortening classics toA.
A.make them easier to read
B.meet a large demand in the market
C.increase the sales of literary books
D.compete with their original versions
27.By describing the shortened classics as"a breath of fresh air,"Ms.WeirA.
A.speaks highly of the cut-down classics
B.shows her love for original classics
C.feels guilty of not reading the classics
D.disapprove of shortening the classics
28.Mr.Crockatt seems to imply thatB.
A.reading the classic works is a confusing attempt
B.shortening the classics does harm to the original
C.publishing the cut-down classics is a difficult job
D.editing the classic works satisfies children's needs.