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【题目】2019 年 10 月 1 日庆祝中华人民共和国成立 70 周年阅兵式在北京成功举行。为了弘扬爱国精神，丰富校园活动，你校（晨光中学）举办了关于观看阅兵式的征文比赛，学生们 踊跃参加。请根据下面的提示内容为校刊英文专栏写一篇报道。题目已给出。

①征文比赛的评选（评出优秀作品、颁奖、获奖征文展示等）。

②参赛作品的特点（反映阅兵场面、爱国热情等）。

③自己的感想和愿望。

注意：1. 词数不少于 100；

2. 必须包含提示内容；

3. 请勿提及真实学校名称；

4. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯。

提示词：阅兵式：military parade 爱国精神: patriotic spirit

Students Joined in The Essay Contest Eagerly

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【答案】Students Joined in The Essay Contest Eagerly

As was reported, the military parade celebrating the 70th anniversary of the founding of the People's Republic of China was successfully held in Beijing on October 1st, 2019. In order to carry forward the patriotic spirit and enrich the campus activities, Chenguang High School held an essay contest about watching the military parade.

The students took part in the essay contest actively. The best essays were voted and winners received the prizes. And there was an excellent essay exhibition in the teaching building. Meanwhile, all the essays showed the exciting scenes in the military parade and everyone's patriotic enthusiasm.

In my opinion, the essay contest was a good chance for us to show our love to our country. I really hope we could have more colorful activities in our school life.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇介绍征文比赛的文章。

第一步：审题。

　　体裁：应用文。

　　时态：一般现在时和一般将来时。

　结构：三段式。

　　　　首段：介绍征文比赛。

　　　　中心段：介绍比赛的流程和特点。

　　　　尾段：发表自己的感想和愿望。

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

As was reported；military parade；patriotic spirit； take part in；

patriotic enthusiasm； in one’s opinion

第三步：连词成句

The military parade celebrating the 70th anniversary of the founding of the People's Republic of China was successfully held in Beijing on October 1st, 2019.

In order to carry forward the patriotic spirit and enrich the campus activities, Chenguang High School held an essay contest about watching the military parade.

The students took part in the essay contest actively.

The best essays were voted and winners received the prizes.

There was an excellent essay exhibition in the teaching building.

All the essays showed the exciting scenes in the military parade and everyone's patriotic enthusiasm.

The essay contest was a good chance for us to show our love to our country.

I really hope we could have more colorful activities in our school life.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改

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