Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter 想了解你的高中生活，请用英语给他写一封信，内容包括：

1. 就读学校历史悠久，学习氛围好；

2. 英语成绩优异；

3. 积极参加课外活动；

4. 打算报考清华大学，致力于科学研究。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：课外活动 extracurricular activities

Dear peter，

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Best wishes，

Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

It’s my pleasure to introduce my high school life to you.

In the past three years, I have been studying in a senior high school with a history of more than 100 years and high standards of discipline and a good atmosphere for study. In order to know more about foreign countries, I focus more attention on English. As a result, my school performance is highly thought of, especially I have made much progress in English.

As an English saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. I don’t want to be that Jack, so I am also actively involved in extracurricular activities.

The College Entrance Examination is approaching. I hope to be admitted to Tsinghua University and devote myself to scientific research.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类作文。本文要求考生以李华的身份给美国朋友Peter写信，介绍你的高中生活以及未来目标。所以本文使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要对如下：1. 就读学校历史悠久，学习氛围好；2. 英语成绩优异；3. 积极参加课外活动；4. 打算报考清华大学，致力于科学研究。建议文章分成2-3段，会显得更有条理。在写作的时候，可以在课文活动部分适当添加内容，让文章更丰满。同时在写作的时候尽量添加连接词，让要点的串联更自然。