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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

As my mother and father were always busy working, so I was often at home by myself. I felt boring all the time and I felt sorry for myself. One day, in my way home from school, I saw a person living in the park. He was wearing dirty but worn-out clothes. He gave me a big smile when he saw me. He looked if he was the happiest man in the world. Looked at him, I realized how luckily I really was. I have enough food to eat and enough clothes to wear and I had hard-working parents who really cared about him. I realized what grateful I was to my parents for all that I had.

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【解析】1.句中as引导原因状语从句，不能和so在同一句中出现，故把so去掉。

2.句意：我感到厌烦。故把boring---bored.

3.固定词组：on one’s way home在某人回家的路上，故把in---on。

4.句意：他穿的脏并且都是旧衣服。此处表示递进的并列关系，故把but---and。

5.句意：他看起来好像是世界上最幸福的男人。根据句意可知在if前加as。

6.句意：我看着他意识到我是多么幸运。此处是现在分词做时间状语，表主动关系，故答案为Looking。注意大写开头。

7.be动词后面用形容词做表语，故把luckily--- lucky。

8.句意：我有足够的食物吃，足够的衣服穿。根据前后句可知句子用一般过去时态，故把have---had。

9.句意：我有真正关心我的勤劳的父母。根据句意可知把him---me。

10.句意：我意识到我对父母的感激之情是因为我所拥有的一切。how修饰形容词或副词，故把what---how。