Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.

Answer 1

【答案】

Two years , I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. , I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two . I called my parents, I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they be worried about because I was so away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.

【解析】

【语篇解读】作者讲述了自己两年前在巴西时所发生的事情。

第一处：副词错误。这里只是说“两年前”用ago，而且并非是在间接引语中。故before改为ago。

第二处：介词错误。rent是及物动词，后面直接跟物作宾语。rent sth.指租某物。故去掉rent后的for。

第三处：副词错误。要用副词对整个句子进行修饰或说明。故Ufortunate改为Unfortunately。

第四处：名词错误。week是可数名词，可数名词被two修饰，要用复数。故week改为weeks。

第五处：连词错误。根据句意：我打了电话给父母，但没有告诉发生的车祸。因此前后句意转折。故so改为but。

第六处：时态错误。宾语从句的时态应该和主句保持一致。主句用一般过去时，宾语从句也应该用一般过去时。故will改为would。

第七处：代词错误。be worried about sb.介词后要用人称代词的宾格，此处指“他们会担心我”。故myself改为me。

第八处：副词错误。根据句意可知，此处不存在比较。故farther改为far。

第九处：形容词错误。此处指“给父母讲有趣的故事”，修饰事物要用-ing结尾的形容词。故interested改为interesting。

第十处：冠词错误。句意：因此，没有人知道真相。这里是特指。故truth前加the。