Question

【题目】 短文改错（每小题1分，满分10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Attention, please, everyone! I have anything to tell you. We will pay a visit to the History Museum this Sunday. Both of us should arrive in the school gate before 8:00. We will set off at 8:10 by the bus together. At about 8:40 we’ll visit the museum followed a guide. At about 11:00 the visit will be over, but we plan to return at about 11:10. The total cost was 20 yuan. Everyone should hand in the money to me before Friday. Don’t forget wear your school uniforms on Sunday. And everyone need to write a composition after the visit. Hope you have a better time.

Answer 1

【答案】

Attention, please, everyone! I have to tell you. We will pay a visit to the History Museum this Sunday. of us should arrive the school gate before 8:00. We will set off at 8:10 by bus together. At about 8:40 we’ll visit the museum a guide. At about 11:00 the visit will be over, we plan to return at about 11:10. The total cost 20 yuan. Everyone should hand in the money to me before Friday. Don’t forget wear your school uniforms on Sunday. And everyone to write a composition after the visit. Hope you have a time.

【解析】

第一处：anything → something 这里是陈述句，要用something。anything常用于疑问句和否定句中。

第二处：Both → All both表示＂两者全都＂，all表示＂三者或三者以上全都＂，由语境可知这里不止两个人，故要把Both改为All。

第三处：in → at arrive at指到达小的地点，arrive in指到达大的地点，这里是指到达学校大门，故要用at。

第四处：去掉the 表示乘坐交通工具时不用定冠词the，故去掉the。

第五处：followed → following we与follow之间为主动关系，所以要用现在分词作状语，故将followed改为following。

第六处：but → and 前后两句之间为顺承关系，因此要用and。故把but改为and。

第七处：was →is 文章的主体时态为一般现在时，故此处要把was改为is。

第八处：forget后加上to forget to do sth.忘记做某事，为固定短语，故要在forget后加上to。

第九处：need → needs everyone作主语时，谓语动词要用单数形式，故把need改为needs。

第十处：better → good have a good time＂玩得愉快＂为固定短语，故把better改为good。