题目内容
【题目】短文改错 (每小题1分，共10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A little kid fell into the lake while she was playing with her little friends. They were too frightening to know what to do next. Unfortunately, a pretty lady and a man passed by and saw the drowning girl. The man immediate dived into the water and took the girl to the bank and at a same time, the lady called the ambulance on time. Before the ambulance came, the lady, who proved to be a nurse, performing first aid to the kid. A few of minutes later, the kid sent to the nearest hospital and finally saved. The story is a good example where first aid can make a lot of differences. From it, we know it is necessary to know basic first aid skills so that we can be better preparing for an emergency.
【答案】
A little kid fell into the lake while she was playing with her little friends. They were too 
to know what to do next. 
, a pretty lady and a man passed by and saw the drowning girl. The man 
dived into the water and took the girl to the bank and at 
same time, the lady called the ambulance 
time. Before the ambulance came, the lady, who proved to be a nurse, 
first aid to the kid. A few 
minutes later, the kid 
sent to the nearest hospital and finally saved. The story is a good example where first aid can make a lot of 
. From it, we know it is necessary to know basic first aid skills so that we can be better 
for an emergency.
【解析】
第一处：frightening→frightened 根据语境，这里是修饰人，指人感到害怕，所以应用frightened。
第二处：Unfortunately→Fortunately 根据语境，这里是说＂幸运的是＂，所以应用Fortunately。
第三处：immediate→immediately 修饰动词应用副词，故用immediately。
第四处：a→the at the same time ＂同时＂，故a改为the。
第五处：on→in 根据语境，应该是及时叫了救护车。in time ＂及时＂，故on改为in。
第六处：performing→performed perform 作的是主句的谓语，根据语境应用过去时，故performing改为performed。
第七处：去掉A few 后的of a few 意为＂几个＂，修饰可数名词复数，故去掉of。
第处：sent 前加was 根据句意，这个孩子被送往最近的医院，send与主语为被动关系，应用被动语态，且此处为过去发生的事情，故在sent前加was。
第九处：differences→difference make a lot of difference 意为＂有很大影响，意义重大＂。
第十处：preparing→prepared be well prepared for ＂为……做好准备＂，故preparing改为prepared。
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