Question

【题目】短文改错（每小题1分，满分10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

As students, all of us will be faced with a problem after passed the college entrance examination. Should we choose a good major and a good university first? Here are some different ideas. Some more prefer to choose a major first so that they can learn they are interested in. On this way they can put their hearts into study and got their favorite jobs in the future. Other believe that the environment is important to one’s develop and that graduates from key universities are more likely to find good jobs. As far as I’m concerning, maybe the choice should be a good university if we can’t obtain all.

Answer 1

【答案】

As students, all of us will be faced with a problem after the college entrance examination. Should we choose a good major a good university first? Here are some different ideas. Some prefer to choose a major first so that they can learn they are interested in. this way they can put their hearts into study and their favorite jobs in the future. believe that the environment is important to one’s and that graduates from key universities are more likely to find good jobs. As far as I’m , maybe the choice should be a good university if we can’t obtain .

【解析】

第一处：passed → passing after为介词，后面接动名作宾语，故把passed改成passing。

第二处：and → or and用于肯定句，而or用于疑问句和否定句，故把and改成or。

第三处：more去掉 此处举例说一些人，并没有比较意义，故把more去掉。

第四处：learn后加what learn后缺宾语，in后也缺宾语，应该用连接代词what，what引导宾语从句，且在从句中作宾语，故在learn后面加what。

第五处：On → In in this way表示＂以这种方式＂，故把On改成In。

第六处：got → get 形式与can后的＂put＂保持一致，应该用一般现在时，故把got改成get。

第七处：Other → Others 形容词性物主代词起形容词作用，修饰名词；而名词性物主代词起名词作用，可单独作主语。故把Other改成Others。

第八处：develop → development 名词作宾语，develop的名词形式是development，故把develop改成development。

第九处：concerning → concerned as far as I’m concerned为固定搭配，表示＂就我而言，对我来说＂，故把concerning改成concerned。

第十处：all span>→ both all指代三个或三个以上的人或物，both指代两个人或物，此处指两者都……，故把all改成both。