Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom 来信询问台湾地震的情况，并表达了要去灾区当志愿者的愿望，请你给他回信，主要内容包括：

1. 多座建筑物倒塌，大量人员被困在废墟中， 116人遇难， 550多人受伤。

2. 当地政府积极组织救援，政府要求务必以最有效的方法发放慰问金并进行灾后重建。中国政府要求中国红十字会捐款人民币200万元。

3. 委婉阻止Tom 去灾区当志愿者，同时说明理由。

Mainland China或China Mainland 中国政府

the Red Cross Society of China中国红十字会

consolation money 慰问金

注意：1.文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2．词数120左右。

3．适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom，

Thank you very much for your concern over the earthquake in Taiwan.

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Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom，

Thank you very much for your concern over the earthquake in Taiwan. Now I'm writing to tell you something about it.

As far as I know, a great many buildings fell down and lots of people were trapped under the ruins in the earthquake.Besides,116 people were killed，more than 550 people injured.The local government actively organized the rescue and demanded to give out consolation money in the most effective way and rebuild their homes. China Mainland paid enough attention and requested the Red Cross Society of China to contribute 20 million yuan.

I know you are dying to help out. But personally, I don't think it's a good idea for you to come， because you will find it hard for you to communicate with people there. After all, you speak a different language. Anyway, thank you again.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

【解析】

本文以一篇应用文。在书写有关书信方面的英语作文时。首先要写好开头，注意称呼的使用，如：Mr或Mrs等等。如果开头已给出的话，则需要将重点放在书写正文上。书写正文的时候一定要注意：不要遗漏文中给出的要点。需要先将文中的内容表述清楚，语句要通顺流畅。尽可能地避免出现语法错误，做到文中语意清楚，简单明了。如有需要的话，可适当增加一些细节，以使表达更加清楚。写作时常运用一般现在时、一般过去时或一般将来时，也可运用一些情态动词。人称要根据内容来定。在书写时一定要尽可能地得体地使用所学词汇和句型。如能使用一些高级词汇、常用的短语和句型，则会给你的文章增添色彩，提高作文的档次，使文章的可读性更强。恰当使用一些连词和插入语，可以使文章表达更加自然、流畅。

1．文章体裁：应用文。

2．行文逻辑：写信目的→情况简介→委婉阻止。

3．词汇短语：运用了较高级的词汇和短语。如：concern(关心)， be dying to do (渴望), help out(帮助摆脱困境), personally, besides, give out，after all(毕竟), anyway(不管怎样),等。

4．句式句法：运用了多样化的句式结构。如：①定语从句：As far as I know；②被动语态：116 people were killed；③it作形式主语结构：it's a good idea for you to come；④宾语从句：you will find that it is hard