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【题目】(一)

假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你周末滑冰时不慎将胳膊摔折,因而未能参加英语考试。请根据以下要点给你的外籍教师Mrs.Clemens写一封电子邮件:

1.表达歉意并解释缺考原因;

2.询问补考时间及课外作业(如阅读书目、作业要求等)。

注意:

1.词数:120150;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Mrs.Clemens,

_________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear Mrs.Clemens,

I’m writing to make an apology to you .Much as I like your English class , I was absent from your test .Last weekend , I was happily skating when suddenly I fell by accident and had my left arm broken.

I’d like to ask you to give me a chance to take a make-up test .Please let me know when it is convenient for you after you make the arrangement .In addition , I’d also like to know your homework for me , such as the reading list for books and the essay to write .Finally , I’d appreciate it if you could tell me the requirements for homework.

I’m sorry to have to put you to so much trouble .Wish you all the best !

Looking forward to your early reply .

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析:电子邮件是一种常见的写作体裁,要求语言简洁明了、通俗易懂,而且要开门见山提出写信的目的。就本篇书面表达而言,在写作时要注意两个方面的要点,一是表达歉意并解释缺考原因;二是询问补考的相关信息,所以在语言上要格外注意委婉礼貌,可以使用的礼貌用语:Would you please ..; I would appreciate it if .; I will be grateful if you can ;Do you mind doing 等等。在结构安排上可以分两段分别介绍两个要点,然后礼貌地用looking forward to your reply来结束邮件内容。在时态选择上前半部分解释原因时要使用一般过去时,而后半部分则可以使用一般现在时态;此外,写作时还要注意恰当使用连接词,以使文章语言连贯流畅。

【亮点说明】本篇范文语言自然流畅、文字通俗简练,语气礼貌委婉,符合这类邮件内容对语言的要求。本文开门见山向老师表示了歉意,然后做进一步解释,在下一段中询问了一些自己想了解的问题,在结构安排上条理性较强,而且在段中使用in addition、also、finally等连接词,使文章层次清晰,上下文衔接自然。此外,作者还使用了让步状语从句much as I like your class,时间状语从句when suddenly I fell by accident and had my left arm broken.和经典句式Id appreciate it if you could tell me the requirements for homework.,祈使句Wish you all the best !等,成功地做到了句式的多变,也造就了文章的亮点。

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