Question

【题目】书面表达

假如最近你们班进行了一项主题为“我的理想职业”的调查。以下是你们小组成员的调查结果。请以＂A Survey on Ideal Jobs＂为题，根据表格内容用英语写一篇100—120个词的调查报告。

	理想职业	原因
Mary	时装设计（fashion designer）	喜欢漂亮的衣服，擅长绘画
Kate	园艺工（gardener）	喜欢植物，想让城市变得更美
Mike	作家	愿意分享美妙的经历
Tom	厨师	想为别人做美味、健康的食物
You	……	……

注意：短文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则，按考试作弊行为认定。

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Answer 1

【答案】

A Survey on Ideal Jobs

Recently a survey has been carried out in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. Here are my members’ intentions and reasons.

Mary wants to be a fashion designer as she is fond of beautiful clothes and is good at drawing. Kate intends to be a gardener. That’s because she is interested in plants and hopes to make the city better by planting more beautiful flowers and trees. Mike, whose mind is full of imagination and creation, wants to be a writer. He prefers to share some wonderful experiences with others. Tom’s goal is to be a cook, because he hopes to cook delicious and healthy food for others.

As for me, I have been dreaming of being a teacher, in which case I can make contributions to children’s education.

【解析】

文章结构清晰，要点齐全，语言流畅。使用了较高级的词汇，如intention, imagination, creation, dream of doing, make contributions to等；文章变换使用词汇和句式，如want to…/intend to…/sb.’s goal is to…/hope to…, be fond of/be interested in/prefer to… , as/because/that’s because等，避免乏味；结尾定语从句“in which case…”的使用也给文章增色不少。