Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last night a strong wind as well as heavily rain struck our area. News came that the trees in the park two kilometers away from our school was blown down. This afternoon, we set off the park to do some cleaning. The head of the park met us or gave us some advice on how to clear away the falling trees, branches and leaves. Some times later, we were working hard when it begins to rain. Because few of us had taken along umbrellas or raincoats, so we were all wet. A rain lasted about an hour and it was a pity that they had to stop our work.

Answer 1

【答案】

Last night a strong wind as well as rain struck our area. News came that the trees in the park two kilometers away from our school blown down. This afternoon, we set offthe park to do some cleaning. The head of the park met us gave us some advice on how to clear away the trees, branches and leaves. Some later, we were working hard when it to rain. Because few of us had taken along umbrellas or raincoats, so we were all wet. rain lasted about an hour and it was a pity that had to stop our work.

【解析】

【语篇解读】本文为记叙文。讲述了一场风雨过后作者学校附近的公园的许多树木被吹倒，于是他们去公园帮助清理的经历。

第一处：第一句话中的heavily改为heavy。考查形容词。根据句子结构可知此处应用形容词heavy修饰名 词rain。

第二处：第二句话中的was改为were。考查主谓一致。根据句子结构可知that引导的主语从句的主语为the trees in the park，故主语从句的谓语应用were blown down。

第三处：第三句话中的off后加for。考查介词。句意：今天下午，我们出发去公园进行打扫。根据句意可 知此处应用介词for构成set off for表示“出发/动身去……”。

第四处：第四句话中的or改为and。考查连词。句意：公园负责人迎接了我们并就如何清理倒下的树木、 树枝和落叶提供了一些建议。根据句意可知此处应把or改为and。

第五处：第四句话中的falling改为fallen。考查非谓语动词。根据句意可知此处应用过去分词fallen作定语， 表示“倒下的”。

第六处：第五句话中的times改为time。考查名词。句意：一段时间之后，我们正在努力工作这时开始下 雨了。time表示“时间”为不可数名词，应该为原形。

第七处：第五句话中的begins改为began。考查时态。根据句意可知此处应用一般过去时，故改为began。

第八处：第六句话中的so去掉。考查连词。根据because与so不能连用可知此处应去掉so。

第九处：最后一句话中的A改为The。考查冠词。句意：这场雨持续了大约一个小时，很遗憾我们不得不 停止工作。根据句意可知此处应用定冠词the表示特指。

第十处：最后一句话中的they改为we。考查代词。根据句意可知此处应把they改为we。