Question

【题目】（九）

某英文报社就“关爱空巢老人”这一话题进行征文。请你根据所给提示写一篇英语短文投稿。内容主要包括：

空巢老人越来越多的原因。2.他们面临的问题。3. 如何帮助他们。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数。

Old people that live alone with no family to take care of them are now called the empty-nest elderly.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Old people that live alone with no family member to take care of them are now called the empty-nest elderly. Social and economic developments have led many young people to choose to work and live far from their hometowns, leaving their parents alone.

The empty-nest elderly can’t manage things that require much manual labor. And because of long-term loneliness, they may have mental problems like depression.

Therefore, we should pay more attention to them. We should call for volunteers to offer them help on a regular basis. We can help them clean the house, buy household items, carry heavy things upstairs, etc. Besides, the government should spend more money providing places for the elderly to be entertained and communicate.

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据所给提示就“关爱空巢老人”这一话题写一篇英语短文。写作要点包括：空巢老人越来越多的原因；他们面临的问题；如何帮助他们等三个方面。词数在100词左右，开头不计入总词数；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

【亮点说明】范文涵盖了所有的写作要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；范文还使用了定语从句、非谓语动词等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：非谓语动词leaving their parents alone；定语从句that require much manual labor等，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；

篇章结构方面：范文注意使用and, therefore, besides等来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得更有条理；

短语和搭配方面：范文使用了choose to do, far from, because of, pay attention to, call for, on a regular basis, spend money doing, provide sth for sb等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。